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Carson 8th Graders

Arizona Rain Chasers

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Mesa

Arizona

United States

NextPitch School Competitions

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Resumen de la competencia

Invent a tool, game, or app that helps people understand the weather better. You could design a fun weather app, a new weather station, or a cool experiment!

Sobre nosotros

We are 8th graders from Mesa who have a passion for the lack of rain our Arizona desert experiences. We are here to tell you why rain is the best weather even for places that aren't a desert.

Problema

We are answering the questions, "what type of weather is the best."

Solución

We are sharing a video that explains why it would be terrible if it never rained again.

Mercado objetivo

Environmentalists, government employees and your day to day citizens! We want everyone to see the benefits of rain and why it would be bad if it never rained again.

Impacto social

Our environment is our future! We want people to understand how lack of rain effects our great state!

Próximos pasos

We need to show everyone what would happen if it never rained again!

Nuestras escuelas y distritos

We worked well together and all agreed on the most important type of weather.

Uso de las contribuciones de los patrocinadores

Your donations will help us build a simulation of the benefits of rainfall to show to our elementary school neighbors.

¡Gracias a nuestros seguidores!
Arizona Rain Chasers
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3/7/25, 15:32

You did an excellent job with your pitch, well done!

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3/7/25, 13:24

Fantastic work on your pitch, "John James"! Keep up the great effort!

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3/7/25, 1:35

Great work, keep it up!

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2/7/25, 23:40

Great work, Evan! Keep it up!

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2/7/25, 23:33

Great work on your pitch, Likith! Keep it up!

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2/7/25, 23:25

Great work on your pitch, Aiden Ford!

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2/7/25, 22:24

Certainly! Here's a rephrased version of the feedback: "Great job on your video! It's clear that you've put a lot of effort into your pitch. Keep up the good work and continue to refine your ideas. I'm excited to see how you develop your concepts further!"

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2/7/25, 20:27

Great job

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2/7/25, 20:04

Thank you for sharing your pitch, "John James." I appreciate your enthusiasm and passion for dogs, as well as your creative approach to promoting them. Your idea of using videos and social media to highlight the positive aspects of having dogs is a strong strategy, and it's clear you have a good understanding of your target audience. To enhance your pitch, consider focusing on how you can present a balanced view that celebrates dogs without comparing them negatively to other animals. This approach might help you reach an even wider audience who appreciate all pets. Additionally, think about how you could use storytelling to capture the unique qualities of dogs that have personally impacted your life. Keep up the great work, and continue sharing your love for dogs with the world!

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2/7/25, 19:50

"Great work on your pitch, Aqil Khan!"

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2/7/25, 17:19

Cats are amazing animals! Next time, try and edit the "um"'s and "uh"s out to make the video flow a little smoother. Great job!

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2/7/25, 16:53

Good work
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Acceso del juez:
Hacer una evaluación

1- No lo hizo

2- Poca evidencia

3- Se cumplieron algunos requisitos

4- Se cumplieron la mayoría de los requisitos

5- Se cumplieron todos los requisitos

Criterio uno:

A video is submitted.

1- No lo hizo

2- Poca evidencia

3- Se cumplieron algunos requisitos

4- Se cumplieron la mayoría de los requisitos

5- Se cumplieron todos los requisitos

Criterio dos:

Written responses have been included.

1- No lo hizo

2- Poca evidencia

3- Se cumplieron algunos requisitos

4- Se cumplieron la mayoría de los requisitos

5- Se cumplieron todos los requisitos

Criterio tres:

The submission is related to weather.

1- No lo hizo

2- Poca evidencia

3- Se cumplieron algunos requisitos

4- Se cumplieron la mayoría de los requisitos

5- Se cumplieron todos los requisitos

Criterio cuatro:

Free from grammar, spelling, and punctuation errors.

1- No lo hizo

2- Poca evidencia

3- Se cumplieron algunos requisitos

4- Se cumplieron la mayoría de los requisitos

5- Se cumplieron todos los requisitos

Criterio cinco:

Submitted on time.

Calificación total:

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¡Gracias por contribuir al crecimiento de los jóvenes innovadores!

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