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Peace on Earth
Peace on Earth
Acerca del terreno de juego
Revere
Massachusetts
United States
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Resumen de la competencia
Come up with an idea that would make the world kinder, greener, or happier. Think big about how one small change can make a difference!
Sobre nosotros
We all care deeply about peace.
Problema
Lack of peace is a problem.
Solución
People need to find peace.
Mercado objetivo
People looking for peace.
Impacto social
A peaceful world is a happy world.
Próximos pasos
Come up with a plan for peace. Reading about MLK and Gandhi.
Nuestras escuelas y distritos
Brainstorming in small groups was effective.
Uso de las contribuciones de los patrocinadores
To help create peace.
¡Gracias a nuestros seguidores!

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24/4/25, 15:56
This was a fantastic pitch! You showed how informed you are about the market space you are entering by understanding and adding in the gamification that comes with your mascot.
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24/4/25, 15:48
Your video is grate and shows how much work you have put in to a Cotten candy business! I did get lost when reading the written submission as it covers skin care products and not cotton candy. This discrepancy made the pitch unclear but a simple update and clarification would get you back on track in no time.
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23/4/25, 18:42
Great job, Michael!
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23/4/25, 13:35
Great job, Israel!
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23/4/25, 9:21
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23/4/25, 9:18
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23/4/25, 0:19
Great job, Joy!
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22/4/25, 14:11
Great job, Raya!
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22/4/25, 2:13
Great Job!
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21/4/25, 20:52
Great products and it sounds like you already have a business going and could grow it even more!
I am a resource navigator with KC Sourcelink and part of my job is to help new businesses grow by creating an action plan that give free resources in the Kansas City market that helps businesses grow! If you need free, additional support- you can reach out to KC Sourcelink to book a free coaching session.
PS- I am a business owner as well :) (Platos Closet Belton)
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21/4/25, 20:27
Hello! Great idea! I feel your passion and connection to your business idea!
I am a resource partner for KC Sourcelink- https://www.kcsourcelink.com
We provide free resources of over 230 connections to help you build and grow a business.
I am also own a Plato's Closet in Belton, MO ( IG: #platosclosetbeltonmo) and I think it is a wonderful idea to help support identity through clothing. It helps build confidence and individuality.
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20/4/25, 13:26
Great job, Jesiah!
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1- No lo hizo
2- Poca evidencia
3- Se cumplieron algunos requisitos
4- Se cumplieron la mayoría de los requisitos
5- Se cumplieron todos los requisitos
Criterio uno:
A video is submitted.
1- No lo hizo
2- Poca evidencia
3- Se cumplieron algunos requisitos
4- Se cumplieron la mayoría de los requisitos
5- Se cumplieron todos los requisitos
Criterio dos:
A written response was submitted.
1- No lo hizo
2- Poca evidencia
3- Se cumplieron algunos requisitos
4- Se cumplieron la mayoría de los requisitos
5- Se cumplieron todos los requisitos
Criterio tres:
The video relates to making the world better.
1- No lo hizo
2- Poca evidencia
3- Se cumplieron algunos requisitos
4- Se cumplieron la mayoría de los requisitos
5- Se cumplieron todos los requisitos
Criterio cuatro:
Free from typos.
1- No lo hizo
2- Poca evidencia
3- Se cumplieron algunos requisitos
4- Se cumplieron la mayoría de los requisitos
5- Se cumplieron todos los requisitos
Criterio cinco:
Submitted on time.
Calificación total:
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