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Best Weather in Kansas

Aqil Khan Shirzad

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Overland Park

Kansas

United States

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Resumen de la competencia

Invent a tool, game, or app that helps people understand the weather better. You could design a fun weather app, a new weather station, or a cool experiment!

Sobre nosotros

I have lived in Kansas for over 2 years. It has the best weather out of all of the States, and the best weather it has had was cloudy but not rainy.

Problema

They don't know where to start.

Solución

It gives them a starting point.

Mercado objetivo

People who want to learn about clouds.

Impacto social

More people will know about different types of clouds.

Próximos pasos

People could research on their own if they are curious.

Nuestras escuelas y distritos

Everything

Uso de las contribuciones de los patrocinadores

None

¡Gracias a nuestros seguidores!
Aqil Khan Shirzad
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3/7/25, 13:24

Fantastic work on your pitch, "John James"! Keep up the great effort!

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3/7/25, 1:35

Great work, keep it up!

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2/7/25, 23:40

Great work, Evan! Keep it up!

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2/7/25, 23:33

Great work on your pitch, Likith! Keep it up!

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2/7/25, 23:25

Great work on your pitch, Aiden Ford!

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2/7/25, 22:24

Certainly! Here's a rephrased version of the feedback: "Great job on your video! It's clear that you've put a lot of effort into your pitch. Keep up the good work and continue to refine your ideas. I'm excited to see how you develop your concepts further!"

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2/7/25, 20:27

Great job

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2/7/25, 20:04

Thank you for sharing your pitch, "John James." I appreciate your enthusiasm and passion for dogs, as well as your creative approach to promoting them. Your idea of using videos and social media to highlight the positive aspects of having dogs is a strong strategy, and it's clear you have a good understanding of your target audience. To enhance your pitch, consider focusing on how you can present a balanced view that celebrates dogs without comparing them negatively to other animals. This approach might help you reach an even wider audience who appreciate all pets. Additionally, think about how you could use storytelling to capture the unique qualities of dogs that have personally impacted your life. Keep up the great work, and continue sharing your love for dogs with the world!

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2/7/25, 19:50

"Great work on your pitch, Aqil Khan!"

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2/7/25, 17:19

Cats are amazing animals! Next time, try and edit the "um"'s and "uh"s out to make the video flow a little smoother. Great job!

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2/7/25, 16:53

Good work

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2/7/25, 16:19

Great effort on your pitch, Cam! Keep up the excellent work!
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Acceso del juez:
Hacer una evaluación

1- No lo hizo

2- Poca evidencia

3- Se cumplieron algunos requisitos

4- Se cumplieron la mayoría de los requisitos

5- Se cumplieron todos los requisitos

Criterio uno:

A video is submitted.

1- No lo hizo

2- Poca evidencia

3- Se cumplieron algunos requisitos

4- Se cumplieron la mayoría de los requisitos

5- Se cumplieron todos los requisitos

Criterio dos:

Written responses have been included.

1- No lo hizo

2- Poca evidencia

3- Se cumplieron algunos requisitos

4- Se cumplieron la mayoría de los requisitos

5- Se cumplieron todos los requisitos

Criterio tres:

The submission is related to weather.

1- No lo hizo

2- Poca evidencia

3- Se cumplieron algunos requisitos

4- Se cumplieron la mayoría de los requisitos

5- Se cumplieron todos los requisitos

Criterio cuatro:

Free from grammar, spelling, and punctuation errors.

1- No lo hizo

2- Poca evidencia

3- Se cumplieron algunos requisitos

4- Se cumplieron la mayoría de los requisitos

5- Se cumplieron todos los requisitos

Criterio cinco:

Submitted on time.

Calificación total:

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¡Gracias por contribuir al crecimiento de los jóvenes innovadores!

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