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Best cat

Aqil Khan Shirzad

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Overland Park

Kansas

United States

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Resumen de la competencia

Pick your favorite animal and show off what makes it special! You can highlight cool facts, fun stories, or amazing talents.

Sobre nosotros

Cats are the best kind of pets for the home.

Problema

The problem is that households have many choices for a pet and they might not have much information on some such as cats.

Solución

This pitch can provide the household with another option and some information on cats that might be helpful for choosing a pet.

Mercado objetivo

I am targeting households that want to get a new or another pet.

Impacto social

This could convince a lot of households to adopt a cat. This can cause a decrease in stray cats and cats in shelters.

Próximos pasos

We can post a video on YouTube or put this in a newspaper.

Nuestras escuelas y distritos

I believe everything went well.

Uso de las contribuciones de los patrocinadores

We will not need funds but if we get some it could pay for posters.

¡Gracias a nuestros seguidores!
Aqil Khan Shirzad
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3/7/25, 15:32

You did an excellent job with your pitch, well done!

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3/7/25, 13:24

Fantastic work on your pitch, "John James"! Keep up the great effort!

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3/7/25, 1:35

Great work, keep it up!

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2/7/25, 23:40

Great work, Evan! Keep it up!

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2/7/25, 23:33

Great work on your pitch, Likith! Keep it up!

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2/7/25, 23:25

Great work on your pitch, Aiden Ford!

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2/7/25, 22:24

Certainly! Here's a rephrased version of the feedback: "Great job on your video! It's clear that you've put a lot of effort into your pitch. Keep up the good work and continue to refine your ideas. I'm excited to see how you develop your concepts further!"

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2/7/25, 20:27

Great job

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2/7/25, 20:04

Thank you for sharing your pitch, "John James." I appreciate your enthusiasm and passion for dogs, as well as your creative approach to promoting them. Your idea of using videos and social media to highlight the positive aspects of having dogs is a strong strategy, and it's clear you have a good understanding of your target audience. To enhance your pitch, consider focusing on how you can present a balanced view that celebrates dogs without comparing them negatively to other animals. This approach might help you reach an even wider audience who appreciate all pets. Additionally, think about how you could use storytelling to capture the unique qualities of dogs that have personally impacted your life. Keep up the great work, and continue sharing your love for dogs with the world!

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2/7/25, 19:50

"Great work on your pitch, Aqil Khan!"

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2/7/25, 17:19

Cats are amazing animals! Next time, try and edit the "um"'s and "uh"s out to make the video flow a little smoother. Great job!

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2/7/25, 16:53

Good work
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Acceso del juez:
Hacer una evaluación

1- No lo hizo

2- Poca evidencia

3- Se cumplieron algunos requisitos

4- Se cumplieron la mayoría de los requisitos

5- Se cumplieron todos los requisitos

Criterio uno:

Highlights an animal.

1- No lo hizo

2- Poca evidencia

3- Se cumplieron algunos requisitos

4- Se cumplieron la mayoría de los requisitos

5- Se cumplieron todos los requisitos

Criterio dos:

Includes a video.

1- No lo hizo

2- Poca evidencia

3- Se cumplieron algunos requisitos

4- Se cumplieron la mayoría de los requisitos

5- Se cumplieron todos los requisitos

Criterio tres:

Includes a written component.

1- No lo hizo

2- Poca evidencia

3- Se cumplieron algunos requisitos

4- Se cumplieron la mayoría de los requisitos

5- Se cumplieron todos los requisitos

Criterio cuatro:

No spelling/grammar/punctuation errors.

1- No lo hizo

2- Poca evidencia

3- Se cumplieron algunos requisitos

4- Se cumplieron la mayoría de los requisitos

5- Se cumplieron todos los requisitos

Criterio cinco:

Submitted on time.

Calificación total:

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¡Gracias por contribuir al crecimiento de los jóvenes innovadores!

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