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Moes Mows Lawn Care

Oskar Moes

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Overland Park

Kansas

United States

SMSD Student Chamber

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Resumen de la competencia

Students practice pitching their business ideas and get helpful advice before the big competition.

Sobre nosotros

My name is Oskar Moes and I own Moes Mows Lawn Care. I am a sophomore at Shawnee Mission South. I work mainly around Overland Park. You can find me on Instagram, facebook, or through my website.

Problema

The problem we solve here at Moes Mows Lawn Care is that some people don’t have the time, are physically unable, or just simply don’t want to do or worry about their lawn.

Solución

The services we provide to fix the problem.
-Lawn Mowing
-Seasonal Cleanups
-Mulch Installation
-Hedge Trimming
-Various Landscaping

Mercado objetivo

My target market is homeowners who live in Overland Park, Prairie Village, Leawood. Especially the elderly or disabled who are unable to maintain their lawn, and busy homeowners who don't have the time but they still want their yard to look good.

Impacto social

Some of the positive impacts
-Keeping well maintained lawns and enhancing the overall aesthetic of a neighborhood
-Supporting the local economy by keeping money circulating within our community
-Being an example of a young entrepreneur which inspires other teenagers
- Saving time and reducing stress for home owners

Próximos pasos

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Nuestras escuelas y distritos

Everything went well as I am very passionate about my business and love talking about it

Uso de las contribuciones de los patrocinadores

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¡Gracias a nuestros seguidores!
Oskar Moes
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31/7/25, 9:12

nice

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31/7/25, 9:12

Great job on your pitch!

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28/7/25, 11:38

Your creative pitch titled "Team ART" shows great potential! Exploring related career paths like art director, creative consultant, or multimedia artist could be inspiring. Consider postsecondary fields such as graphic design or fine arts to deepen your skills. Keep refining your ideas and stay inspired, as your enthusiasm for creativity shines through. Your journey in the arts holds exciting possibilities, and I look forward to seeing how you develop your vision further.

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28/7/25, 11:26

Your creativity shines through, even in abstract responses. Keep exploring and refining your ideas. Consider careers in creative writing, coding, or abstract art. Fields like computer science and digital media studies might excite you. Keep up the enthusiasm!

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28/7/25, 10:33

Good job ........................

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28/7/25, 7:55

Your creativity in crafting "ZZZZZ" shows potential. Consider exploring careers in cryptography, data analysis, or software development, where your unique approach can shine. Studying computer science or information technology could further enhance your skills. Keep refining your ideas, and remember that each attempt is a step toward improvement.

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28/7/25, 6:05

Your pitch shows creativity! While the responses are placeholders, focusing on clear and meaningful content will enhance your presentation. Consider exploring careers such as data analyst, software developer, or technical writer. Fields like computer science or information technology could offer valuable insights. Keep refining your ideas, and don't hesitate to ask for guidance as you develop your skills. You're on the right track, and with practice, your pitches will become even more compelling.

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25/7/25, 16:18

Good Job

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25/7/25, 16:17

Fantastic job!

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25/7/25, 16:09

Nice Work!

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25/7/25, 15:59

Good job!

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25/7/25, 15:52

Your creativity with "Team Diamonds" is impressive! Consider exploring careers in cryptography, data analysis, or software development. Pursuing postsecondary studies in computer science or information technology could further enhance your skills. Keep up the great work!
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2- Poca evidencia

3- Se cumplieron algunos requisitos

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Criterio cinco:

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