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Moes Mows Lawn Care

Oskar Moes

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Overland Park

Kansas

United States

SMSD Student Chamber

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Resumen de la competencia

Students practice pitching their business ideas and get helpful advice before the big competition.

Sobre nosotros

My name is Oskar Moes and I own Moes Mows Lawn Care. I am a sophomore at Shawnee Mission South. I work mainly around Overland Park. You can find me on Instagram, facebook, or through my website.

Problema

The problem we solve here at Moes Mows Lawn Care is that some people don’t have the time, are physically unable, or just simply don’t want to do or worry about their lawn.

Solución

The services we provide to fix the problem.
-Lawn Mowing
-Seasonal Cleanups
-Mulch Installation
-Hedge Trimming
-Various Landscaping

Mercado objetivo

My target market is homeowners who live in Overland Park, Prairie Village, Leawood. Especially the elderly or disabled who are unable to maintain their lawn, and busy homeowners who don't have the time but they still want their yard to look good.

Impacto social

Some of the positive impacts
-Keeping well maintained lawns and enhancing the overall aesthetic of a neighborhood
-Supporting the local economy by keeping money circulating within our community
-Being an example of a young entrepreneur which inspires other teenagers
- Saving time and reducing stress for home owners

Próximos pasos

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Nuestras escuelas y distritos

Everything went well as I am very passionate about my business and love talking about it

Uso de las contribuciones de los patrocinadores

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¡Gracias a nuestros seguidores!
Oskar Moes
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24/7/25, 11:11

Good Job

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24/7/25, 10:39

Great start with your pitch titled "teem"! Your creativity has potential, and refining your responses will enhance clarity. Consider exploring careers as a Marketing Specialist, Content Creator, or Business Development Manager. Pursuing fields like Communication Studies or Business Administration could further develop your skills. Keep working on expressing your ideas clearly, as this will strengthen your pitch and help you excel in these areas. Your dedication is promising, and continued effort will lead to success.

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24/7/25, 9:35

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23/7/25, 14:10

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23/7/25, 11:25

nice

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21/7/25, 16:03

nice

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21/7/25, 15:44

Your exploration into usability testing is a great start. It’s important to identify problems and propose thoughtful solutions. Consider careers in UX design, software testing, or product management, which require skills in problem-solving and analysis. Further studies in computer science or human-computer interaction could enhance your expertise. Keep refining your approach and enjoy the learning process. Your enthusiasm is a valuable asset as you make adjustments and evaluate impacts.

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20/7/25, 16:32

Testing with 1.25 backer contribution.

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19/7/25, 9:21

Your pitch for "Teamm Ruchika" is creative and impactful. Focusing on making science resources accessible is a great initiative, and your enthusiasm for fun learning is infectious. Consider careers like Science Educator, Educational Content Developer, or Community Outreach Coordinator. Pursuing studies in Science Communication or Educational Technology could enhance your project. Keep gathering innovative ideas to engage science enthusiasts and ensure an enriching learning experience. Your passion for making learning enjoyable is commendable!

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17/7/25, 5:40

nice

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16/7/25, 7:38

Testing reject pitch function. Test only.

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16/7/25, 5:06

Great
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Acceso del juez:
Hacer una evaluación

1- No lo hizo

2- Poca evidencia

3- Se cumplieron algunos requisitos

4- Se cumplieron la mayoría de los requisitos

5- Se cumplieron todos los requisitos

Criterio uno:

Includes a video.

1- No lo hizo

2- Poca evidencia

3- Se cumplieron algunos requisitos

4- Se cumplieron la mayoría de los requisitos

5- Se cumplieron todos los requisitos

Criterio dos:

Video has presenter shown.

1- No lo hizo

2- Poca evidencia

3- Se cumplieron algunos requisitos

4- Se cumplieron la mayoría de los requisitos

5- Se cumplieron todos los requisitos

Criterio tres:

Video includes slides.

1- No lo hizo

2- Poca evidencia

3- Se cumplieron algunos requisitos

4- Se cumplieron la mayoría de los requisitos

5- Se cumplieron todos los requisitos

Criterio cuatro:

Includes a written component.

1- No lo hizo

2- Poca evidencia

3- Se cumplieron algunos requisitos

4- Se cumplieron la mayoría de los requisitos

5- Se cumplieron todos los requisitos

Criterio cinco:

Spelling and grammar check.

Calificación total:

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¡Gracias por contribuir al crecimiento de los jóvenes innovadores!

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