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Moes Mows Lawn Care

Oskar Moes

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Overland Park

Kansas

United States

SMSD Student Chamber

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Resumen de la competencia

Students practice pitching their business ideas and get helpful advice before the big competition.

Sobre nosotros

My name is Oskar Moes and I own Moes Mows Lawn Care. I am a sophomore at Shawnee Mission South. I work mainly around Overland Park. You can find me on Instagram, facebook, or through my website.

Problema

The problem we solve here at Moes Mows Lawn Care is that some people don’t have the time, are physically unable, or just simply don’t want to do or worry about their lawn.

Solución

The services we provide to fix the problem.
-Lawn Mowing
-Seasonal Cleanups
-Mulch Installation
-Hedge Trimming
-Various Landscaping

Mercado objetivo

My target market is homeowners who live in Overland Park, Prairie Village, Leawood. Especially the elderly or disabled who are unable to maintain their lawn, and busy homeowners who don't have the time but they still want their yard to look good.

Impacto social

Some of the positive impacts
-Keeping well maintained lawns and enhancing the overall aesthetic of a neighborhood
-Supporting the local economy by keeping money circulating within our community
-Being an example of a young entrepreneur which inspires other teenagers
- Saving time and reducing stress for home owners

Próximos pasos

Will be included with final submission.

Nuestras escuelas y distritos

Everything went well as I am very passionate about my business and love talking about it

Uso de las contribuciones de los patrocinadores

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¡Gracias a nuestros seguidores!
Oskar Moes
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27/6/25, 22:56

Hello Eron, Thank you for submitting your pitch titled "Cam." I appreciate your effort and enthusiasm in responding to the questions. It's great to see that you feel confident about your idea. Remember, it's okay to have questions or areas where you're unsure, as this is all part of the learning process. Keep exploring and refining your pitch, and don't hesitate to ask for help or clarification on anything that feels uncertain. You're doing a great job, and I look forward to seeing how your pitch develops! Keep up the great work, [Your Name]

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27/6/25, 22:42

Thank you for submitting your pitch titled "undefined." I appreciate the effort you've put into it. Keep up the good work, and I encourage you to continue developing your ideas further. If you have any questions or need any support, feel free to reach out!

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27/6/25, 17:42

Yes!

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25/6/25, 10:33

Thank you for submitting your pitch titled "rr." I appreciate your effort in completing the assignment. I see that you've provided brief answers to the questions, and I encourage you to expand on your ideas to give a clearer picture of your pitch. For example, you mentioned "students" in response to one question—consider elaborating on how your pitch would benefit them. Additionally, if there are areas where you feel unsure, like in response to Q7, don't hesitate to ask for clarification or guidance. Keep up the good work, and I look forward to seeing how your pitch develops!

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24/6/25, 21:18

Well done!

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24/6/25, 20:23

Hello! Thank you for sharing your pitch titled "undefined." I appreciate your effort and creativity. To help you improve it, let's work on clarifying the title and content to ensure your ideas are communicated effectively. Feel free to reach out if you'd like any assistance or feedback on specific parts of your pitch. Keep up the great work!

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24/6/25, 1:24

Great work!

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21/6/25, 22:07

Well done, Nayan Team! Keep up the fantastic work!

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21/6/25, 22:06

Well done on your Upwork pitch! Keep up the great work!

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21/6/25, 22:06

Great work!

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21/6/25, 22:04

Very nice job!

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21/6/25, 22:00

Very nice job!
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Acceso del juez:
Hacer una evaluación

1- No lo hizo

2- Poca evidencia

3- Se cumplieron algunos requisitos

4- Se cumplieron la mayoría de los requisitos

5- Se cumplieron todos los requisitos

Criterio uno:

Includes a video.

1- No lo hizo

2- Poca evidencia

3- Se cumplieron algunos requisitos

4- Se cumplieron la mayoría de los requisitos

5- Se cumplieron todos los requisitos

Criterio dos:

Video has presenter shown.

1- No lo hizo

2- Poca evidencia

3- Se cumplieron algunos requisitos

4- Se cumplieron la mayoría de los requisitos

5- Se cumplieron todos los requisitos

Criterio tres:

Video includes slides.

1- No lo hizo

2- Poca evidencia

3- Se cumplieron algunos requisitos

4- Se cumplieron la mayoría de los requisitos

5- Se cumplieron todos los requisitos

Criterio cuatro:

Includes a written component.

1- No lo hizo

2- Poca evidencia

3- Se cumplieron algunos requisitos

4- Se cumplieron la mayoría de los requisitos

5- Se cumplieron todos los requisitos

Criterio cinco:

Spelling and grammar check.

Calificación total:

1

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