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8th Graders at Carson!

Carson Cougar Connectors

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Arizona

United States

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Sobre nosotros

We are 8th grade students who want to make a change in our community! We have seen first hand the harm our environment can have on the homeless community. We want to provide resources in the form of items and education to help them be more successful.

Problema

The homeless community is growing in Arizona due to the increase of prices and lack of affordable housing. We do not have the resources to help those who need it most.

Solución

We would like to put together food and toiletries bag with information on local shelters and educational pamphlets to provide them with information to help them get out of their current situation.

Mercado objetivo

Fellow members over our state who want to help our homeless community.

Impacto social

We hope this helps our community by providing information for a way out of their current circumstances which in turn can help fill jobs in our community.

Próximos pasos

We are going to gather local resources that our homeless community can visit for more help and provide them with basic necessities to make sure they are fed and can start getting the things they need to build a better path.

Nuestras escuelas y distritos

It was a struggle to find useable resources to put on our flyers because Arizona does not have a lot in terms of places to benefit our homeless community.

Uso de las contribuciones de los patrocinadores

This is going to help us purchase items and print out information for the homeless community.

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19/7/25, 9:21

Your pitch for "Teamm Ruchika" is creative and impactful. Focusing on making science resources accessible is a great initiative, and your enthusiasm for fun learning is infectious. Consider careers like Science Educator, Educational Content Developer, or Community Outreach Coordinator. Pursuing studies in Science Communication or Educational Technology could enhance your project. Keep gathering innovative ideas to engage science enthusiasts and ensure an enriching learning experience. Your passion for making learning enjoyable is commendable!

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17/7/25, 5:40

nice

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16/7/25, 7:38

Testing reject pitch function. Test only.

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16/7/25, 5:06

Great

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15/7/25, 6:31

Your pitch shows potential and creativity! Consider providing more detail and structure to strengthen your ideas. Exploring careers like marketing specialist, creative director, or product manager could be inspiring. Studying fields such as business administration or communications might enhance your skills in crafting compelling pitches. Keep refining your approach, and you'll continue to improve.

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15/7/25, 6:12

Your pitch "Ruchi" is a great start in addressing the challenges of reducing sugar intake while maintaining flavor. To enhance your idea, consider exploring new alternatives and solutions further. Your effort aligns well with careers in nutrition, food technology, and product development. Pursuing studies in health sciences or culinary arts could deepen your understanding and open more opportunities. Keep refining your innovative approach to promote better health without compromising on taste.

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10/7/25, 9:06

Good Job

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9/7/25, 5:29

Great job, Aqil Khan! Your pitch was impressive and well-presented. Keep up the fantastic work!

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7/7/25, 13:41

You're doing an amazing job! Keep up the excellent work with your 'liiti' pitch!

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7/7/25, 12:50

Thank you for your "Ruchi" pitch. Your narrative can be more engaging by sharing specific experiences that led to your idea. Explore the impact of duplicacy on consumers and businesses to highlight the issue's significance. Detail strategies to identify authentic companies. Target specific chocolate lover groups for tailored strategies. Examples of integrating quality and social awareness will strengthen your pitch. Share innovative awareness campaign ideas and appealing rewards. Consider careers in brand management, market research analysis, or product development, and fields like business administration or marketing.

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7/7/25, 8:38

Thank you for sharing your pitch titled "Weather Kiddos." It's great to see your enthusiasm for weather and your desire to help others understand it better. You've identified an important gap in weather knowledge and proposed a way to make information more accessible. Here are a few thoughts on your responses to help you refine your pitch:

1. Your personal passion for weather really shines through in your first response. Consider expanding on how your interest can engage and educate others.

2. You've highlighted a common issue: people often find weather complex or confusing. It might be helpful to explore specific examples of misunderstandings you aim to address.

3. When discussing "Weather information," think about what makes your approach unique. How will your information be presented in a way that's both informative and engaging?

4. The mention of "Weather people" is intriguing. Perhaps you could elaborate on how these individuals will contribute to your project and why they're essential.

5. Transforming your audience into "Informed people" is a wonderful goal. Consider outlining the specific benefits they will gain from understanding weather better.

6. Your idea about helping people "Get supplies" is practical and valuable. You might want to explain how you plan to guide them in acquiring the right resources.

7. Your positive attitude in response to "All is great" is refreshing. Keep that enthusiasm as you continue refining your ideas!

8. Finally, when it comes to "Lesson supplies," think about what materials or tools would be most effective in helping you achieve your educational goals.

Overall, your pitch has a lot of potential, and with a bit more detail, it could become even more impactful. Keep up the great work!

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7/7/25, 7:40

Great job on your pitch! You've laid a solid foundation with your responses. Highlighting the story behind "Rj Team" and focusing on duplicacy and uniqueness shows a clear understanding of your brand's identity. The emphasis on chocolate lovers and improving product quality is appealing to your target audience. Additionally, your focus on increasing awareness and knowledge about the right products is an excellent strategy for building trust with your customers. Lastly, your intention to incorporate better technologies demonstrates forward-thinking. Keep up the fantastic work!

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