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8th Graders at Carson!

Carson Cougar Connectors

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Arizona

United States

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Sobre nosotros

We are 8th grade students who want to make a change in our community! We have seen first hand the harm our environment can have on the homeless community. We want to provide resources in the form of items and education to help them be more successful.

Problema

The homeless community is growing in Arizona due to the increase of prices and lack of affordable housing. We do not have the resources to help those who need it most.

Solución

We would like to put together food and toiletries bag with information on local shelters and educational pamphlets to provide them with information to help them get out of their current situation.

Mercado objetivo

Fellow members over our state who want to help our homeless community.

Impacto social

We hope this helps our community by providing information for a way out of their current circumstances which in turn can help fill jobs in our community.

Próximos pasos

We are going to gather local resources that our homeless community can visit for more help and provide them with basic necessities to make sure they are fed and can start getting the things they need to build a better path.

Nuestras escuelas y distritos

It was a struggle to find useable resources to put on our flyers because Arizona does not have a lot in terms of places to benefit our homeless community.

Uso de las contribuciones de los patrocinadores

This is going to help us purchase items and print out information for the homeless community.

¡Gracias a nuestros seguidores!
Carson Cougar Connectors
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3/7/25, 13:24

Fantastic work on your pitch, "John James"! Keep up the great effort!

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3/7/25, 1:35

Great work, keep it up!

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2/7/25, 23:40

Great work, Evan! Keep it up!

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2/7/25, 23:33

Great work on your pitch, Likith! Keep it up!

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2/7/25, 23:25

Great work on your pitch, Aiden Ford!

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2/7/25, 22:24

Certainly! Here's a rephrased version of the feedback: "Great job on your video! It's clear that you've put a lot of effort into your pitch. Keep up the good work and continue to refine your ideas. I'm excited to see how you develop your concepts further!"

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2/7/25, 20:27

Great job

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2/7/25, 20:04

Thank you for sharing your pitch, "John James." I appreciate your enthusiasm and passion for dogs, as well as your creative approach to promoting them. Your idea of using videos and social media to highlight the positive aspects of having dogs is a strong strategy, and it's clear you have a good understanding of your target audience. To enhance your pitch, consider focusing on how you can present a balanced view that celebrates dogs without comparing them negatively to other animals. This approach might help you reach an even wider audience who appreciate all pets. Additionally, think about how you could use storytelling to capture the unique qualities of dogs that have personally impacted your life. Keep up the great work, and continue sharing your love for dogs with the world!

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2/7/25, 19:50

"Great work on your pitch, Aqil Khan!"

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2/7/25, 17:19

Cats are amazing animals! Next time, try and edit the "um"'s and "uh"s out to make the video flow a little smoother. Great job!

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2/7/25, 16:53

Good work

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2/7/25, 16:19

Great effort on your pitch, Cam! Keep up the excellent work!
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