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MJV Lawn and Tree Care
Michael Voth
À propos du pitch
Overland Park
Kansas
United States
SMSD Student Chamber
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Welcome to the SMSD Student Chamber's Business Showcase! This is an inspiring business competition designed to highlight PK-12 students who run REAL businesses in the Shawnee Mission School District. The top five business owners with the most votes and highest judge ratings will present their business ideas to a panel of esteemed judges and a vibrant audience on April 30.
Awards at the live April 30 Business Showcase are:
1st Place: $1,100
2nd Place: $600
3rd Place: $300
To learn more or join the Student Chamber, visit www.SMSDChamber.org today!
À propos de nous
My name is Michael Voth, and I am a 15-year-old sophomore at Shawnee Mission South High School. Music has always been a significant part of my life, and I’ve had the privilege of participating in both the Marching and Concert bands.
In addition to music, I stay active by participating in cross country and track. These sports challenge me physically and teach me the importance of discipline and perseverance. Competing has pushed me to set personal goals and reinforced my belief in hard work.
I also take great pride in my role as an Eagle Scout with the Boy Scouts of America, which has equipped me with essential leadership and life skills. Scouting has instilled a sense of responsibility to serve my community, and managing my own lawn and tree care business allows me to put my skills into practice.
Problème
Overgrown lawns not only lower property value but also create an unsightly appearance. Tackling them can be physically demanding and even lead to injury.
Solution
Our lawn care services take the hassle and risk off your hands, leaving your yard looking clean, healthy, and well-maintained.
Marché cible
Our customers include anyone in need of lawn care services—from mowing and mulching to tree trimming and more. We offer a wide range of services and flexible payment options to ensure everyone in our community has access to quality landscaping solutions.
Impact sociétal
My lawn care business will positively impact the community by enhancing the beauty and health of green spaces. By using environmentally friendly practices, I aim to create lawns that boost property values and community pride. Additionally, my services will promote sustainability and encourage biodiversity.
Prochaines étapes
To move forward in my business, I would need better equipment to work faster, and more customers to fill that empty time
Nos écoles et districts
Some things that went well when making my pitch were already having experience in the business; however, some things that went badly were having to try and make a quality presentation with little marketing experience.
Utilisation des contributions des contributeurs
If I won this competition for the first prize, I would spend the money on a new mower.
If I won the second prize, I would spend it on other small equipment.
If I won the third prize, I would spend it on gas and other consumable resources.
Merci à nos supporters !
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24/04/25 15:56
This was a fantastic pitch! You showed how informed you are about the market space you are entering by understanding and adding in the gamification that comes with your mascot.
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24/04/25 15:48
Your video is grate and shows how much work you have put in to a Cotten candy business! I did get lost when reading the written submission as it covers skin care products and not cotton candy. This discrepancy made the pitch unclear but a simple update and clarification would get you back on track in no time.
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23/04/25 18:42
Great job, Michael!
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23/04/25 13:35
Great job, Israel!
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23/04/25 09:21
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23/04/25 09:18
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23/04/25 00:19
Great job, Joy!
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22/04/25 14:11
Great job, Raya!
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22/04/25 02:13
Great Job!
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21/04/25 20:52
Great products and it sounds like you already have a business going and could grow it even more!
I am a resource navigator with KC Sourcelink and part of my job is to help new businesses grow by creating an action plan that give free resources in the Kansas City market that helps businesses grow! If you need free, additional support- you can reach out to KC Sourcelink to book a free coaching session.
PS- I am a business owner as well :) (Platos Closet Belton)
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21/04/25 20:27
Hello! Great idea! I feel your passion and connection to your business idea!
I am a resource partner for KC Sourcelink- https://www.kcsourcelink.com
We provide free resources of over 230 connections to help you build and grow a business.
I am also own a Plato's Closet in Belton, MO ( IG: #platosclosetbeltonmo) and I think it is a wonderful idea to help support identity through clothing. It helps build confidence and individuality.
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20/04/25 13:26
Great job, Jesiah!
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Idea Clarity & Problem Solving Is the product or service clearly explained? Does it solve a real problem in a meaningful or unique way?
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Customer & Market Fit Are the target customers well defined? Is there an understanding of how to reach them and why they’ll buy?
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Differentiation & Innovation What makes this idea stand out from competitors or the status quo? Is there a clear unique value proposition?
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Team Readiness & Use of Funds Does the team seem prepared to take action? Are proposed uses of funding thoughtful, realistic, and specific?
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Viability & Future Plans Is there a path to launch or scale? Have they made progress (milestones/traction)? Do they have a clear next step?
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Merci de contribuer à la croissance des jeunes innovateurs !