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Moes Mows
Oskar
À propos du pitch
Overland Park
Kansas
United States
SMSD Student Chamber
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Welcome to the SMSD Student Chamber's Business Showcase! This is an inspiring business competition designed to highlight PK-12 students who run REAL businesses in the Shawnee Mission School District. The top five business owners with the most votes and highest judge ratings will present their business ideas to a panel of esteemed judges and a vibrant audience on April 30.
Awards at the live April 30 Business Showcase are:
1st Place: $1,100
2nd Place: $600
3rd Place: $300
To learn more or join the Student Chamber, visit www.SMSDChamber.org today!
À propos de nous
My name is Oskar Moes and I own Moes Mows Lawn Care. I am a sophomore at Shawnee Mission South. I work mainly around Overland Park. You can find me on Instagram, facebook, or through my website.
Problème
The problem we solve here at Moes Mows Lawn Care is that some people don’t have the time, are physically unable, or just simply don’t want to do or worry about their lawn.
Solution
The services we provide to fix the problem.
-Lawn Mowing
-Seasonal Cleanups
-Mulch Installation
-Hedge Trimming
-Various Landscaping
Marché cible
My target market is homeowners who live in Overland Park, Prairie Village, Leawood. Especially the elderly or disabled who are unable to maintain their lawn, and busy homeowners who don't have the time but they still want their yard to look good.
Impact sociétal
Prochaines étapes
I Would like to continue this business as I plan to stay around here for college and do my lawn mowing business on the side and keep growing.
Nos écoles et districts
Everything went well, I love talking about my business and love talking about it.
Utilisation des contributions des contributeurs
Commercial Mower
Newer/ More Powerful Truck
New Trailer
Merci à nos supporters !
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24/04/25 15:56
This was a fantastic pitch! You showed how informed you are about the market space you are entering by understanding and adding in the gamification that comes with your mascot.
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24/04/25 15:48
Your video is grate and shows how much work you have put in to a Cotten candy business! I did get lost when reading the written submission as it covers skin care products and not cotton candy. This discrepancy made the pitch unclear but a simple update and clarification would get you back on track in no time.
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23/04/25 18:42
Great job, Michael!
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23/04/25 13:35
Great job, Israel!
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23/04/25 09:21
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23/04/25 09:18
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23/04/25 00:19
Great job, Joy!
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22/04/25 14:11
Great job, Raya!
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22/04/25 02:13
Great Job!
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21/04/25 20:52
Great products and it sounds like you already have a business going and could grow it even more!
I am a resource navigator with KC Sourcelink and part of my job is to help new businesses grow by creating an action plan that give free resources in the Kansas City market that helps businesses grow! If you need free, additional support- you can reach out to KC Sourcelink to book a free coaching session.
PS- I am a business owner as well :) (Platos Closet Belton)
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21/04/25 20:27
Hello! Great idea! I feel your passion and connection to your business idea!
I am a resource partner for KC Sourcelink- https://www.kcsourcelink.com
We provide free resources of over 230 connections to help you build and grow a business.
I am also own a Plato's Closet in Belton, MO ( IG: #platosclosetbeltonmo) and I think it is a wonderful idea to help support identity through clothing. It helps build confidence and individuality.
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20/04/25 13:26
Great job, Jesiah!
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Idea Clarity & Problem Solving Is the product or service clearly explained? Does it solve a real problem in a meaningful or unique way?
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Customer & Market Fit Are the target customers well defined? Is there an understanding of how to reach them and why they’ll buy?
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Differentiation & Innovation What makes this idea stand out from competitors or the status quo? Is there a clear unique value proposition?
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Team Readiness & Use of Funds Does the team seem prepared to take action? Are proposed uses of funding thoughtful, realistic, and specific?
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Viability & Future Plans Is there a path to launch or scale? Have they made progress (milestones/traction)? Do they have a clear next step?
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Merci de contribuer à la croissance des jeunes innovateurs !