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Giraffes are the Real Kings of the Jungle
Tall Tales
À propos du pitch
Amarillo
Texas
United States
NextPitch School Competitions
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Dossier de concours
Pick your favorite animal and show off what makes it special! You can highlight cool facts, fun stories, or amazing talents.
À propos de nous
The Tall Tales is a team of one that truly believes in the magic of the giraffe and will do anything the learn, explore, support, and educate on the matter.
The Giraffes are the Real Kings of the Jungle is my stance on where giraffes should stand in everyone's hearts as they reflect on their majesty.
Problème
There is a long standing saying that "lions are the king of the jungle." However, this has not truly been proven as fact rather than opinion. In a time of free opinions, it is imperative that we take the time to see which animal really reigns.
Solution
Through research and evaluation, it has been proven that the giraffe is the true king of the jungle. Giraffes are majestic, tall, and give life to the jungle.
Marché cible
Ages 4-99, Animal lovers and enthusiasts, Consistent learners about world habitats and environments
Impact sociétal
A change in view on this matter opens up the mind to see that old sayings are not always true and that anyone can rise to their true potential.
Prochaines étapes
Once the competition is on, our team will need to canvas the constituents to inform them of the impact that giraffes have on the jungle environment. We would then use those who come to believe as well as canvasers for our cause.
Nos écoles et districts
Our original team could not come to a consensus on the best animal and therefore had to split. However, before we split, we all did a great job of researching our cause and communicating that professionally and cordially with our teammates.
Utilisation des contributions des contributeurs
Funds will not be raised for this.
Merci à nos supporters !
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28/05/25 08:53
hii
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26/05/25 11:53
accepted
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24/04/25 15:56
This was a fantastic pitch! You showed how informed you are about the market space you are entering by understanding and adding in the gamification that comes with your mascot.
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24/04/25 15:48
Your video is grate and shows how much work you have put in to a Cotten candy business! I did get lost when reading the written submission as it covers skin care products and not cotton candy. This discrepancy made the pitch unclear but a simple update and clarification would get you back on track in no time.
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23/04/25 18:42
Great job, Michael!
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23/04/25 13:35
Great job, Israel!
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23/04/25 09:21
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23/04/25 09:18
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23/04/25 00:19
Great job, Joy!
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22/04/25 14:11
Great job, Raya!
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22/04/25 02:13
Great Job!
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21/04/25 20:52
Great products and it sounds like you already have a business going and could grow it even more!
I am a resource navigator with KC Sourcelink and part of my job is to help new businesses grow by creating an action plan that give free resources in the Kansas City market that helps businesses grow! If you need free, additional support- you can reach out to KC Sourcelink to book a free coaching session.
PS- I am a business owner as well :) (Platos Closet Belton)
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Highlights an animal.
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Includes a written component.
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No spelling/grammar/punctuation errors.
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Critère cinq :
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