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Lion Art

Syuzanna Avetis

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This is one amazing pitch! Contact the competition host for details.

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À propos du pitch

Sacramento

California

United States

NextPitch School Competitions

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Pick your favorite animal and show off what makes it special! You can highlight cool facts, fun stories, or amazing talents.

À propos de nous

My name is Syuzanna Avetis. I am a high school student very interested in lions. Lions exhibit strong social behavior and have night vision, allowing them to hunt at night.

Problème

The population of lions is decreasing every year, and learning about lions and raising awareness encourages the future generation of kids to protect these animals.

Solution

The solution is raising awareness about lions by getting children interested in learning about lions.

Marché cible

This pitch is aimed at children interested in learning about lions in their environment.

Impact sociétal

The societal impact of learning about lions increases awareness and protects their natural habitats.

Prochaines étapes

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Utilisation des contributions des contributeurs

The funds will go to national wildlife conservation organizations.

Merci à nos supporters !
Syuzanna Avetis
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03/07/25 15:32

You did an excellent job with your pitch, well done!

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03/07/25 13:24

Fantastic work on your pitch, "John James"! Keep up the great effort!

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03/07/25 01:35

Great work, keep it up!

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02/07/25 23:40

Great work, Evan! Keep it up!

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02/07/25 23:33

Great work on your pitch, Likith! Keep it up!

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02/07/25 23:25

Great work on your pitch, Aiden Ford!

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02/07/25 22:24

Certainly! Here's a rephrased version of the feedback: "Great job on your video! It's clear that you've put a lot of effort into your pitch. Keep up the good work and continue to refine your ideas. I'm excited to see how you develop your concepts further!"

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02/07/25 20:27

Great job

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02/07/25 20:04

Thank you for sharing your pitch, "John James." I appreciate your enthusiasm and passion for dogs, as well as your creative approach to promoting them. Your idea of using videos and social media to highlight the positive aspects of having dogs is a strong strategy, and it's clear you have a good understanding of your target audience. To enhance your pitch, consider focusing on how you can present a balanced view that celebrates dogs without comparing them negatively to other animals. This approach might help you reach an even wider audience who appreciate all pets. Additionally, think about how you could use storytelling to capture the unique qualities of dogs that have personally impacted your life. Keep up the great work, and continue sharing your love for dogs with the world!

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02/07/25 19:50

"Great work on your pitch, Aqil Khan!"

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02/07/25 17:19

Cats are amazing animals! Next time, try and edit the "um"'s and "uh"s out to make the video flow a little smoother. Great job!

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02/07/25 16:53

Good work
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No spelling/grammar/punctuation errors.

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Critère cinq :

Submitted on time.

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Merci de contribuer à la croissance des jeunes innovateurs !

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