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Write a creative eulogy (farewell speech) for a character who lived on the edges of society. Show their story and why they mattered.

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03/07/25 15:32

You did an excellent job with your pitch, well done!

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03/07/25 13:24

Fantastic work on your pitch, "John James"! Keep up the great effort!

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03/07/25 01:35

Great work, keep it up!

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02/07/25 23:40

Great work, Evan! Keep it up!

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02/07/25 23:33

Great work on your pitch, Likith! Keep it up!

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02/07/25 23:25

Great work on your pitch, Aiden Ford!

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02/07/25 22:24

Certainly! Here's a rephrased version of the feedback: "Great job on your video! It's clear that you've put a lot of effort into your pitch. Keep up the good work and continue to refine your ideas. I'm excited to see how you develop your concepts further!"

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02/07/25 20:27

Great job

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02/07/25 20:04

Thank you for sharing your pitch, "John James." I appreciate your enthusiasm and passion for dogs, as well as your creative approach to promoting them. Your idea of using videos and social media to highlight the positive aspects of having dogs is a strong strategy, and it's clear you have a good understanding of your target audience. To enhance your pitch, consider focusing on how you can present a balanced view that celebrates dogs without comparing them negatively to other animals. This approach might help you reach an even wider audience who appreciate all pets. Additionally, think about how you could use storytelling to capture the unique qualities of dogs that have personally impacted your life. Keep up the great work, and continue sharing your love for dogs with the world!

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02/07/25 19:50

"Great work on your pitch, Aqil Khan!"

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02/07/25 17:19

Cats are amazing animals! Next time, try and edit the "um"'s and "uh"s out to make the video flow a little smoother. Great job!

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02/07/25 16:53

Good work
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Faire une évaluation

1- N'a pas fait

2- Peu de preuves

3- Certaines exigences sont respectées

4- La plupart des exigences sont satisfaites

5- Toutes les exigences sont respectées

Critère 1 :

The eulogy created for Johnny includes specific details that come from the book The Outsiders.

1- N'a pas fait

2- Peu de preuves

3- Certaines exigences sont respectées

4- La plupart des exigences sont satisfaites

5- Toutes les exigences sont respectées

Critère deux :

The student was able to understand the character's perspective it is written from and made the eulogy believable to that character.

1- N'a pas fait

2- Peu de preuves

3- Certaines exigences sont respectées

4- La plupart des exigences sont satisfaites

5- Toutes les exigences sont respectées

Critère trois :

The eulogy evokes some kind of emotional response from the reader.

1- N'a pas fait

2- Peu de preuves

3- Certaines exigences sont respectées

4- La plupart des exigences sont satisfaites

5- Toutes les exigences sont respectées

Quatrième critère :

The writer has a clear understanding of grammar and there are no grammatical errors.

1- N'a pas fait

2- Peu de preuves

3- Certaines exigences sont respectées

4- La plupart des exigences sont satisfaites

5- Toutes les exigences sont respectées

Critère cinq :

The written piece flows easily and makes sense to the reader.

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