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Moes Mows Lawn Care

Oskar Moes

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À propos du pitch

Overland Park

Kansas

United States

SMSD Student Chamber

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Students practice pitching their business ideas and get helpful advice before the big competition.

À propos de nous

My name is Oskar Moes and I own Moes Mows Lawn Care. I am a sophomore at Shawnee Mission South. I work mainly around Overland Park. You can find me on Instagram, facebook, or through my website.

Problème

The problem we solve here at Moes Mows Lawn Care is that some people don’t have the time, are physically unable, or just simply don’t want to do or worry about their lawn.

Solution

The services we provide to fix the problem.
-Lawn Mowing
-Seasonal Cleanups
-Mulch Installation
-Hedge Trimming
-Various Landscaping

Marché cible

My target market is homeowners who live in Overland Park, Prairie Village, Leawood. Especially the elderly or disabled who are unable to maintain their lawn, and busy homeowners who don't have the time but they still want their yard to look good.

Impact sociétal

Some of the positive impacts
-Keeping well maintained lawns and enhancing the overall aesthetic of a neighborhood
-Supporting the local economy by keeping money circulating within our community
-Being an example of a young entrepreneur which inspires other teenagers
- Saving time and reducing stress for home owners

Prochaines étapes

Will be included with final submission.

Nos écoles et districts

Everything went well as I am very passionate about my business and love talking about it

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Merci à nos supporters !
Oskar Moes
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24/07/25 15:48

Your pitch titled "Ruchi" shows creativity and potential. To develop your skills further, consider exploring careers in creative writing, marketing, or content creation. Pursuing studies in communications or media studies could also provide valuable insights and enhance your abilities. Keep refining your ideas and structure to make your pitch even more compelling. Your enthusiasm is evident, and with continued effort, you have the potential to excel in these areas. Keep up the great work!

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24/07/25 11:11

Good Job

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24/07/25 10:39

Great start with your pitch titled "teem"! Your creativity has potential, and refining your responses will enhance clarity. Consider exploring careers as a Marketing Specialist, Content Creator, or Business Development Manager. Pursuing fields like Communication Studies or Business Administration could further develop your skills. Keep working on expressing your ideas clearly, as this will strengthen your pitch and help you excel in these areas. Your dedication is promising, and continued effort will lead to success.

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24/07/25 09:35

eruio

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23/07/25 14:10

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23/07/25 11:25

nice

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21/07/25 16:03

nice

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21/07/25 15:44

Your exploration into usability testing is a great start. It’s important to identify problems and propose thoughtful solutions. Consider careers in UX design, software testing, or product management, which require skills in problem-solving and analysis. Further studies in computer science or human-computer interaction could enhance your expertise. Keep refining your approach and enjoy the learning process. Your enthusiasm is a valuable asset as you make adjustments and evaluate impacts.

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20/07/25 16:32

Testing with 1.25 backer contribution.

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19/07/25 09:21

Your pitch for "Teamm Ruchika" is creative and impactful. Focusing on making science resources accessible is a great initiative, and your enthusiasm for fun learning is infectious. Consider careers like Science Educator, Educational Content Developer, or Community Outreach Coordinator. Pursuing studies in Science Communication or Educational Technology could enhance your project. Keep gathering innovative ideas to engage science enthusiasts and ensure an enriching learning experience. Your passion for making learning enjoyable is commendable!

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17/07/25 05:40

nice

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16/07/25 07:38

Testing reject pitch function. Test only.
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