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Moes Mows Lawn Care

Oskar Moes

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À propos du pitch

Overland Park

Kansas

United States

SMSD Student Chamber

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Students practice pitching their business ideas and get helpful advice before the big competition.

À propos de nous

My name is Oskar Moes and I own Moes Mows Lawn Care. I am a sophomore at Shawnee Mission South. I work mainly around Overland Park. You can find me on Instagram, facebook, or through my website.

Problème

The problem we solve here at Moes Mows Lawn Care is that some people don’t have the time, are physically unable, or just simply don’t want to do or worry about their lawn.

Solution

The services we provide to fix the problem.
-Lawn Mowing
-Seasonal Cleanups
-Mulch Installation
-Hedge Trimming
-Various Landscaping

Marché cible

My target market is homeowners who live in Overland Park, Prairie Village, Leawood. Especially the elderly or disabled who are unable to maintain their lawn, and busy homeowners who don't have the time but they still want their yard to look good.

Impact sociétal

Some of the positive impacts
-Keeping well maintained lawns and enhancing the overall aesthetic of a neighborhood
-Supporting the local economy by keeping money circulating within our community
-Being an example of a young entrepreneur which inspires other teenagers
- Saving time and reducing stress for home owners

Prochaines étapes

Will be included with final submission.

Nos écoles et districts

Everything went well as I am very passionate about my business and love talking about it

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Merci à nos supporters !
Oskar Moes
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03/07/25 01:35

Great work, keep it up!

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02/07/25 23:40

Great work, Evan! Keep it up!

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02/07/25 23:33

Great work on your pitch, Likith! Keep it up!

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02/07/25 23:25

Great work on your pitch, Aiden Ford!

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02/07/25 22:24

Certainly! Here's a rephrased version of the feedback: "Great job on your video! It's clear that you've put a lot of effort into your pitch. Keep up the good work and continue to refine your ideas. I'm excited to see how you develop your concepts further!"

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02/07/25 20:27

Great job

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02/07/25 20:04

Thank you for sharing your pitch, "John James." I appreciate your enthusiasm and passion for dogs, as well as your creative approach to promoting them. Your idea of using videos and social media to highlight the positive aspects of having dogs is a strong strategy, and it's clear you have a good understanding of your target audience. To enhance your pitch, consider focusing on how you can present a balanced view that celebrates dogs without comparing them negatively to other animals. This approach might help you reach an even wider audience who appreciate all pets. Additionally, think about how you could use storytelling to capture the unique qualities of dogs that have personally impacted your life. Keep up the great work, and continue sharing your love for dogs with the world!

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02/07/25 19:50

"Great work on your pitch, Aqil Khan!"

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02/07/25 17:19

Cats are amazing animals! Next time, try and edit the "um"'s and "uh"s out to make the video flow a little smoother. Great job!

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02/07/25 16:53

Good work

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02/07/25 16:19

Great effort on your pitch, Cam! Keep up the excellent work!

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02/07/25 14:54

You’ve done an excellent job with your FocusFlow pitch! Your ability to clearly articulate the problem and present a well-thought-out solution is impressive. The integration of the Pomodoro Technique with white noise is a smart approach, as it draws on proven methods to address common productivity challenges. Your detailed plan for moving the project forward, including market research, the development of an MVP, and strategic marketing efforts, shows a strong understanding of what it takes to bring an innovative product to market. I also appreciate your awareness of potential challenges, such as market differentiation and scalability, and your consideration of strategies to overcome them. Keep up the great work, and continue refining your strategy as you gather more feedback—your proactive approach is a key strength!
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Merci de contribuer à la croissance des jeunes innovateurs !

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