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Chambre noire du Heartland
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À propos du pitch
Kansas City
Missouri
États-Unis
Été ProX
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Dossier de concours
Au cours des cinq dernières semaines, les participants à ProX ont travaillé avec l'un de nos 120+ employeurs pour résoudre des problèmes concrets au sein de leur entreprise ou de leur secteur. Ils ont utilisé la conception centrée sur l'humain pour créer des solutions viables et réalisables. Vous trouverez ci-dessous tous les pitchs de l'expérience ProX 2024. Regardez les pitchs, trouvez votre favori et votez !
À propos de nous
La Chambre de commerce Heartland Black s'efforce de mettre en relation les entreprises avec les ressources et d'autres entreprises. Cette soumission est une présentation en trois volets.
Problème
Les petites entreprises manquent d’accès aux ressources nécessaires pour se développer.
Solution
Réorienter un programme pour fournir de nouvelles stratégies marketing et de nouvelles connexions aux entreprises de Kansas City.
Marché cible
Petites entreprises à Kansas City
Impact sociétal
Accès accru aux ressources et aux opportunités de croissance pour les petites entreprises.
Prochaines étapes
Organisez un événement d’aperçu pour tester le programme et obtenir un financement.
Nos écoles et districts
Lycée Turner (Turner USD 202), École Ewing Marion Kauffman (à charte), Lycée Bishop Ward (privé), Lycée Olathe North, Lycée J.C. Harmon (Écoles publiques de Kansas City, Kansas)
Utilisation des contributions des contributeurs
Nous n'acceptons pas de contributions pendant le concours de pitch. Rejoignez-nous le jeudi 11 juillet pour présenter le travail de tous les stagiaires, reconnaître nos gagnants du concours à trois volets et regarder les finalistes du pitch en direct sur la grande scène. Pour en savoir plus et confirmer votre présence, rendez-vous sur :
https://www.eventbrite.com/e/2024-prox-showcase-tickets-936614347727

Merci à nos supporters !
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17/07/25 05:40
nice

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16/07/25 07:38
Testing reject pitch function. Test only.

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16/07/25 05:06
Great

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15/07/25 06:31
Your pitch shows potential and creativity! Consider providing more detail and structure to strengthen your ideas. Exploring careers like marketing specialist, creative director, or product manager could be inspiring. Studying fields such as business administration or communications might enhance your skills in crafting compelling pitches. Keep refining your approach, and you'll continue to improve.

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15/07/25 06:12
Your pitch "Ruchi" is a great start in addressing the challenges of reducing sugar intake while maintaining flavor. To enhance your idea, consider exploring new alternatives and solutions further. Your effort aligns well with careers in nutrition, food technology, and product development. Pursuing studies in health sciences or culinary arts could deepen your understanding and open more opportunities. Keep refining your innovative approach to promote better health without compromising on taste.

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10/07/25 09:06
Good Job

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09/07/25 05:29
Great job, Aqil Khan! Your pitch was impressive and well-presented. Keep up the fantastic work!

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07/07/25 13:41
You're doing an amazing job! Keep up the excellent work with your 'liiti' pitch!

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07/07/25 12:50
Thank you for your "Ruchi" pitch. Your narrative can be more engaging by sharing specific experiences that led to your idea. Explore the impact of duplicacy on consumers and businesses to highlight the issue's significance. Detail strategies to identify authentic companies. Target specific chocolate lover groups for tailored strategies. Examples of integrating quality and social awareness will strengthen your pitch. Share innovative awareness campaign ideas and appealing rewards. Consider careers in brand management, market research analysis, or product development, and fields like business administration or marketing.

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07/07/25 08:38
Thank you for sharing your pitch titled "Weather Kiddos." It's great to see your enthusiasm for weather and your desire to help others understand it better. You've identified an important gap in weather knowledge and proposed a way to make information more accessible. Here are a few thoughts on your responses to help you refine your pitch:
1. Your personal passion for weather really shines through in your first response. Consider expanding on how your interest can engage and educate others.
2. You've highlighted a common issue: people often find weather complex or confusing. It might be helpful to explore specific examples of misunderstandings you aim to address.
3. When discussing "Weather information," think about what makes your approach unique. How will your information be presented in a way that's both informative and engaging?
4. The mention of "Weather people" is intriguing. Perhaps you could elaborate on how these individuals will contribute to your project and why they're essential.
5. Transforming your audience into "Informed people" is a wonderful goal. Consider outlining the specific benefits they will gain from understanding weather better.
6. Your idea about helping people "Get supplies" is practical and valuable. You might want to explain how you plan to guide them in acquiring the right resources.
7. Your positive attitude in response to "All is great" is refreshing. Keep that enthusiasm as you continue refining your ideas!
8. Finally, when it comes to "Lesson supplies," think about what materials or tools would be most effective in helping you achieve your educational goals.
Overall, your pitch has a lot of potential, and with a bit more detail, it could become even more impactful. Keep up the great work!

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07/07/25 07:40
Great job on your pitch! You've laid a solid foundation with your responses. Highlighting the story behind "Rj Team" and focusing on duplicacy and uniqueness shows a clear understanding of your brand's identity. The emphasis on chocolate lovers and improving product quality is appealing to your target audience. Additionally, your focus on increasing awareness and knowledge about the right products is an excellent strategy for building trust with your customers. Lastly, your intention to incorporate better technologies demonstrates forward-thinking. Keep up the fantastic work!

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04/07/25 07:46
Thank you for submitting your pitch titled "Test gpt team." It's great to see you taking the initiative to develop your ideas. Here are a few thoughts on your responses:
1. **Test**: It's always a good idea to start with a clear description of your project. Try to provide more detail about your overall concept.
2. **Test Problem**: You've identified a problem, which is a crucial first step. Consider expanding on this to explain why it's significant and who it affects.
3. **Test Solution**: You've proposed a solution, which is fantastic. Think about how you can elaborate on this to demonstrate its effectiveness.
4. **Test Market**: Understanding your market is essential. Try to include more specifics about your target audience and any research you’ve done.
5. **Test Social Impact**: It’s wonderful to see you considering the social impact of your project. Think about how you can articulate this more clearly, perhaps by outlining the benefits.
6. **Test Next Step**: Planning your next steps shows foresight. It would be helpful to include more detailed action items or goals.
7. **Test Reflection**: Reflecting on your work is an important process. Consider sharing more about what you’ve learned or areas for improvement.
8. **Test**: Keep pushing forward with these ideas. Providing more detail and clarity will strengthen your pitch.
Overall, you're on the right track. Keep refining your responses and expanding on these areas with more specific information. Great job, and I’m looking forward to seeing how your pitch develops!
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