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雷莫尔

密苏里州

美国

雷佩克高中

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竞赛简介

学区的使命是让每一位学生都拥有成功而有意义的人生。我们的愿景是建立一个面向未来的社区,致力于终身学习。

关于我们

我们的团队 Helmet Heads 与 MMC 公司的 Darby Mitchell 配对。MMC 希望我们帮助员工了解电子邮件礼仪。

问题

MMC 公司面临的问题是,他们的员工需要更有效地联系其他员工。MMC 公司希望他们的员工能够毫无问题地互相发送电子邮件。总的来说,他们希望整个公司的沟通更加顺畅。

解决方案

我们想出的解决方案是,每隔一周,我们会向客户发送一篇新文章或视频,内容与我们为该周选择的主题有关。确保内容有趣,并包含足够的信息,让员工理解。

目标市场

我认为每个人都会受益,因为 Darby Mitchell 是客户。她不必花更多时间与父亲和员工交流电子邮件礼仪。员工也从中受益,因为他们可以通过电子邮件访问文章,因此现在他们可以有更多的时间陪伴家人。

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下一步

我们需要继续制作这些物品,但要确保没有重复任何内容。在这种情况下,要确保没有任何东西看起来相同,这样工人就不会感到无聊。我们将与客户会面,确保一切正常。

我们的学校和学区

进展顺利的事情是能够为我们的问题想出一个很好的解决方案。另外,另一件进展顺利的事情是想出了如何培训员工。除此之外,我们并没有遇到太多困难,我们想出了两个对客户来说足够好的方案。

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25/7/15 06:31

Your pitch shows potential and creativity! Consider providing more detail and structure to strengthen your ideas. Exploring careers like marketing specialist, creative director, or product manager could be inspiring. Studying fields such as business administration or communications might enhance your skills in crafting compelling pitches. Keep refining your approach, and you'll continue to improve.

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25/7/15 06:12

Your pitch "Ruchi" is a great start in addressing the challenges of reducing sugar intake while maintaining flavor. To enhance your idea, consider exploring new alternatives and solutions further. Your effort aligns well with careers in nutrition, food technology, and product development. Pursuing studies in health sciences or culinary arts could deepen your understanding and open more opportunities. Keep refining your innovative approach to promote better health without compromising on taste.

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25/7/10 09:06

Good Job

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25/7/9 05:29

Great job, Aqil Khan! Your pitch was impressive and well-presented. Keep up the fantastic work!

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25/7/7 13:41

You're doing an amazing job! Keep up the excellent work with your 'liiti' pitch!

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25/7/7 12:50

Thank you for your "Ruchi" pitch. Your narrative can be more engaging by sharing specific experiences that led to your idea. Explore the impact of duplicacy on consumers and businesses to highlight the issue's significance. Detail strategies to identify authentic companies. Target specific chocolate lover groups for tailored strategies. Examples of integrating quality and social awareness will strengthen your pitch. Share innovative awareness campaign ideas and appealing rewards. Consider careers in brand management, market research analysis, or product development, and fields like business administration or marketing.

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25/7/7 08:38

Thank you for sharing your pitch titled "Weather Kiddos." It's great to see your enthusiasm for weather and your desire to help others understand it better. You've identified an important gap in weather knowledge and proposed a way to make information more accessible. Here are a few thoughts on your responses to help you refine your pitch: 1. Your personal passion for weather really shines through in your first response. Consider expanding on how your interest can engage and educate others. 2. You've highlighted a common issue: people often find weather complex or confusing. It might be helpful to explore specific examples of misunderstandings you aim to address. 3. When discussing "Weather information," think about what makes your approach unique. How will your information be presented in a way that's both informative and engaging? 4. The mention of "Weather people" is intriguing. Perhaps you could elaborate on how these individuals will contribute to your project and why they're essential. 5. Transforming your audience into "Informed people" is a wonderful goal. Consider outlining the specific benefits they will gain from understanding weather better. 6. Your idea about helping people "Get supplies" is practical and valuable. You might want to explain how you plan to guide them in acquiring the right resources. 7. Your positive attitude in response to "All is great" is refreshing. Keep that enthusiasm as you continue refining your ideas! 8. Finally, when it comes to "Lesson supplies," think about what materials or tools would be most effective in helping you achieve your educational goals. Overall, your pitch has a lot of potential, and with a bit more detail, it could become even more impactful. Keep up the great work!

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25/7/7 07:40

Great job on your pitch! You've laid a solid foundation with your responses. Highlighting the story behind "Rj Team" and focusing on duplicacy and uniqueness shows a clear understanding of your brand's identity. The emphasis on chocolate lovers and improving product quality is appealing to your target audience. Additionally, your focus on increasing awareness and knowledge about the right products is an excellent strategy for building trust with your customers. Lastly, your intention to incorporate better technologies demonstrates forward-thinking. Keep up the fantastic work!

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25/7/4 07:46

Thank you for submitting your pitch titled "Test gpt team." It's great to see you taking the initiative to develop your ideas. Here are a few thoughts on your responses: 1. **Test**: It's always a good idea to start with a clear description of your project. Try to provide more detail about your overall concept. 2. **Test Problem**: You've identified a problem, which is a crucial first step. Consider expanding on this to explain why it's significant and who it affects. 3. **Test Solution**: You've proposed a solution, which is fantastic. Think about how you can elaborate on this to demonstrate its effectiveness. 4. **Test Market**: Understanding your market is essential. Try to include more specifics about your target audience and any research you’ve done. 5. **Test Social Impact**: It’s wonderful to see you considering the social impact of your project. Think about how you can articulate this more clearly, perhaps by outlining the benefits. 6. **Test Next Step**: Planning your next steps shows foresight. It would be helpful to include more detailed action items or goals. 7. **Test Reflection**: Reflecting on your work is an important process. Consider sharing more about what you’ve learned or areas for improvement. 8. **Test**: Keep pushing forward with these ideas. Providing more detail and clarity will strengthen your pitch. Overall, you're on the right track. Keep refining your responses and expanding on these areas with more specific information. Great job, and I’m looking forward to seeing how your pitch develops!

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25/7/4 07:17

Your pitch sounds great! Keep up the excellent work with 'FocusFlow'!

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25/7/4 04:59

Great work on your 'Paint Team' pitch! Keep it up!

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25/7/3 15:32

You did an excellent job with your pitch, well done!
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