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堪萨斯城青年枪支改革委员会

KCMO-市长办公室

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堪萨斯城地铁

密苏里州

美国

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关于我们

我们的雇主是市长昆顿·卢卡斯的办公室。他是堪萨斯城市长,我们与他的行政团队合作。

问题

我们面临的问题是这个国家枪支泛滥和暴力泛滥。更具体地说,我们正在努力缓解我们地区的暴力。

解决方案

我们的解决方案是鼓励年轻人发出自己的声音,并利用他们的经验为减少该地区的枪支暴力做出贡献。

目标市场

每个人都受到枪支暴力的影响,尤其是学校里的年轻人。在过去的几个月里,我们看到学校、公共场所和我们自己的社区中发生了多起悲剧,这些悲剧都受到了枪支暴力的影响。

社会影响

它将鼓励未来的领导人在他们自己和他们的社区中发声。它将使年轻人在我们的政治环境中发挥重要作用。

下一步

我们需要通过这项法令,说服市议会成员,鼓励年轻人参与,并鼓励年轻人在学校创建自己的分会。

我们的学校和学区

这项工作提高了我们的研究技能,让我们更有信心参与立法过程。我们的网络也得到了扩展。

支持者捐款的使用

我们目前不接受选民的捐款。此宣传是 ProX 竞赛的一部分,奖金为 5,000 美元。组织活动,宣传枪支管制和枪支暴力。在密苏里州和堪萨斯州的各个学区开设其他分会。

感谢我们的支持者!
KCMO-市长办公室
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25/7/15 06:31

Your pitch shows potential and creativity! Consider providing more detail and structure to strengthen your ideas. Exploring careers like marketing specialist, creative director, or product manager could be inspiring. Studying fields such as business administration or communications might enhance your skills in crafting compelling pitches. Keep refining your approach, and you'll continue to improve.

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25/7/15 06:12

Your pitch "Ruchi" is a great start in addressing the challenges of reducing sugar intake while maintaining flavor. To enhance your idea, consider exploring new alternatives and solutions further. Your effort aligns well with careers in nutrition, food technology, and product development. Pursuing studies in health sciences or culinary arts could deepen your understanding and open more opportunities. Keep refining your innovative approach to promote better health without compromising on taste.

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25/7/10 09:06

Good Job

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25/7/9 05:29

Great job, Aqil Khan! Your pitch was impressive and well-presented. Keep up the fantastic work!

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25/7/7 13:41

You're doing an amazing job! Keep up the excellent work with your 'liiti' pitch!

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25/7/7 12:50

Thank you for your "Ruchi" pitch. Your narrative can be more engaging by sharing specific experiences that led to your idea. Explore the impact of duplicacy on consumers and businesses to highlight the issue's significance. Detail strategies to identify authentic companies. Target specific chocolate lover groups for tailored strategies. Examples of integrating quality and social awareness will strengthen your pitch. Share innovative awareness campaign ideas and appealing rewards. Consider careers in brand management, market research analysis, or product development, and fields like business administration or marketing.

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25/7/7 08:38

Thank you for sharing your pitch titled "Weather Kiddos." It's great to see your enthusiasm for weather and your desire to help others understand it better. You've identified an important gap in weather knowledge and proposed a way to make information more accessible. Here are a few thoughts on your responses to help you refine your pitch: 1. Your personal passion for weather really shines through in your first response. Consider expanding on how your interest can engage and educate others. 2. You've highlighted a common issue: people often find weather complex or confusing. It might be helpful to explore specific examples of misunderstandings you aim to address. 3. When discussing "Weather information," think about what makes your approach unique. How will your information be presented in a way that's both informative and engaging? 4. The mention of "Weather people" is intriguing. Perhaps you could elaborate on how these individuals will contribute to your project and why they're essential. 5. Transforming your audience into "Informed people" is a wonderful goal. Consider outlining the specific benefits they will gain from understanding weather better. 6. Your idea about helping people "Get supplies" is practical and valuable. You might want to explain how you plan to guide them in acquiring the right resources. 7. Your positive attitude in response to "All is great" is refreshing. Keep that enthusiasm as you continue refining your ideas! 8. Finally, when it comes to "Lesson supplies," think about what materials or tools would be most effective in helping you achieve your educational goals. Overall, your pitch has a lot of potential, and with a bit more detail, it could become even more impactful. Keep up the great work!

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25/7/7 07:40

Great job on your pitch! You've laid a solid foundation with your responses. Highlighting the story behind "Rj Team" and focusing on duplicacy and uniqueness shows a clear understanding of your brand's identity. The emphasis on chocolate lovers and improving product quality is appealing to your target audience. Additionally, your focus on increasing awareness and knowledge about the right products is an excellent strategy for building trust with your customers. Lastly, your intention to incorporate better technologies demonstrates forward-thinking. Keep up the fantastic work!

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25/7/4 07:46

Thank you for submitting your pitch titled "Test gpt team." It's great to see you taking the initiative to develop your ideas. Here are a few thoughts on your responses: 1. **Test**: It's always a good idea to start with a clear description of your project. Try to provide more detail about your overall concept. 2. **Test Problem**: You've identified a problem, which is a crucial first step. Consider expanding on this to explain why it's significant and who it affects. 3. **Test Solution**: You've proposed a solution, which is fantastic. Think about how you can elaborate on this to demonstrate its effectiveness. 4. **Test Market**: Understanding your market is essential. Try to include more specifics about your target audience and any research you’ve done. 5. **Test Social Impact**: It’s wonderful to see you considering the social impact of your project. Think about how you can articulate this more clearly, perhaps by outlining the benefits. 6. **Test Next Step**: Planning your next steps shows foresight. It would be helpful to include more detailed action items or goals. 7. **Test Reflection**: Reflecting on your work is an important process. Consider sharing more about what you’ve learned or areas for improvement. 8. **Test**: Keep pushing forward with these ideas. Providing more detail and clarity will strengthen your pitch. Overall, you're on the right track. Keep refining your responses and expanding on these areas with more specific information. Great job, and I’m looking forward to seeing how your pitch develops!

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25/7/4 07:17

Your pitch sounds great! Keep up the excellent work with 'FocusFlow'!

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25/7/4 04:59

Great work on your 'Paint Team' pitch! Keep it up!

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25/7/3 15:32

You did an excellent job with your pitch, well done!
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