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无家可归,并不绝望

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堪萨斯城地铁

密苏里州

美国

ProX夏季

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竞赛简介

ProX 是一项真实世界学习计划,为高中生提供暑期专业体验。

关于我们

Students Of Change 是堪萨斯城地区领先的青年倡导组织,致力于赋权下一代。致力于赋权青年,让他们能够畅所欲言,并就他们关心的问题做出改变。他们的目标是通过倡导立法来改变堪萨斯城大都会。

问题

房价不断上涨,人们被迫流落街头。我们如何在堪萨斯城大都市打造经济适用房?

解决方案

提议立法使建造附属住宅单元 (ADU) 的能力合法化。这将使房主能够在自己的房产上建造第二套小型住宅以出租。创建安全、稳定且负担得起的住房,让人们摆脱无家可归的境地。

目标市场

我们的目标市场是堪萨斯城市区 2,000 多名无家可归者。以及面临失去家园风险的弱势低收入群体。

社会影响

这有助于解决困扰这座城市多年的问题——创建一个更健康、更强大的社会,让每个人都享有幸福生活的权利。

下一步

我们需要与市立法者会面起草一项法令(法律)。同时还需要获得资金,使我们能够成功地向公众推销我们的计划,以获得对法令的支持。

我们的学校和学区

我们学到了很多关于这座城市的知识和研究技巧。我们的工作让我们热衷于帮助那些最需要帮助的人。

支持者捐款的使用

我们目前不接受选民的捐款。此宣传是 ProX 竞赛的一部分,奖金为 5,000 美元。我们将使用资金来教育人们有关附属住宅单元的知识。我们还将资助我们的营销计划,以获得对该条例的支持,使其更有可能获得公众支持。

感谢我们的支持者!
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25/7/15 06:31

Your pitch shows potential and creativity! Consider providing more detail and structure to strengthen your ideas. Exploring careers like marketing specialist, creative director, or product manager could be inspiring. Studying fields such as business administration or communications might enhance your skills in crafting compelling pitches. Keep refining your approach, and you'll continue to improve.

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25/7/15 06:12

Your pitch "Ruchi" is a great start in addressing the challenges of reducing sugar intake while maintaining flavor. To enhance your idea, consider exploring new alternatives and solutions further. Your effort aligns well with careers in nutrition, food technology, and product development. Pursuing studies in health sciences or culinary arts could deepen your understanding and open more opportunities. Keep refining your innovative approach to promote better health without compromising on taste.

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25/7/10 09:06

Good Job

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25/7/9 05:29

Great job, Aqil Khan! Your pitch was impressive and well-presented. Keep up the fantastic work!

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25/7/7 13:41

You're doing an amazing job! Keep up the excellent work with your 'liiti' pitch!

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25/7/7 12:50

Thank you for your "Ruchi" pitch. Your narrative can be more engaging by sharing specific experiences that led to your idea. Explore the impact of duplicacy on consumers and businesses to highlight the issue's significance. Detail strategies to identify authentic companies. Target specific chocolate lover groups for tailored strategies. Examples of integrating quality and social awareness will strengthen your pitch. Share innovative awareness campaign ideas and appealing rewards. Consider careers in brand management, market research analysis, or product development, and fields like business administration or marketing.

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25/7/7 08:38

Thank you for sharing your pitch titled "Weather Kiddos." It's great to see your enthusiasm for weather and your desire to help others understand it better. You've identified an important gap in weather knowledge and proposed a way to make information more accessible. Here are a few thoughts on your responses to help you refine your pitch: 1. Your personal passion for weather really shines through in your first response. Consider expanding on how your interest can engage and educate others. 2. You've highlighted a common issue: people often find weather complex or confusing. It might be helpful to explore specific examples of misunderstandings you aim to address. 3. When discussing "Weather information," think about what makes your approach unique. How will your information be presented in a way that's both informative and engaging? 4. The mention of "Weather people" is intriguing. Perhaps you could elaborate on how these individuals will contribute to your project and why they're essential. 5. Transforming your audience into "Informed people" is a wonderful goal. Consider outlining the specific benefits they will gain from understanding weather better. 6. Your idea about helping people "Get supplies" is practical and valuable. You might want to explain how you plan to guide them in acquiring the right resources. 7. Your positive attitude in response to "All is great" is refreshing. Keep that enthusiasm as you continue refining your ideas! 8. Finally, when it comes to "Lesson supplies," think about what materials or tools would be most effective in helping you achieve your educational goals. Overall, your pitch has a lot of potential, and with a bit more detail, it could become even more impactful. Keep up the great work!

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25/7/7 07:40

Great job on your pitch! You've laid a solid foundation with your responses. Highlighting the story behind "Rj Team" and focusing on duplicacy and uniqueness shows a clear understanding of your brand's identity. The emphasis on chocolate lovers and improving product quality is appealing to your target audience. Additionally, your focus on increasing awareness and knowledge about the right products is an excellent strategy for building trust with your customers. Lastly, your intention to incorporate better technologies demonstrates forward-thinking. Keep up the fantastic work!

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25/7/4 07:46

Thank you for submitting your pitch titled "Test gpt team." It's great to see you taking the initiative to develop your ideas. Here are a few thoughts on your responses: 1. **Test**: It's always a good idea to start with a clear description of your project. Try to provide more detail about your overall concept. 2. **Test Problem**: You've identified a problem, which is a crucial first step. Consider expanding on this to explain why it's significant and who it affects. 3. **Test Solution**: You've proposed a solution, which is fantastic. Think about how you can elaborate on this to demonstrate its effectiveness. 4. **Test Market**: Understanding your market is essential. Try to include more specifics about your target audience and any research you’ve done. 5. **Test Social Impact**: It’s wonderful to see you considering the social impact of your project. Think about how you can articulate this more clearly, perhaps by outlining the benefits. 6. **Test Next Step**: Planning your next steps shows foresight. It would be helpful to include more detailed action items or goals. 7. **Test Reflection**: Reflecting on your work is an important process. Consider sharing more about what you’ve learned or areas for improvement. 8. **Test**: Keep pushing forward with these ideas. Providing more detail and clarity will strengthen your pitch. Overall, you're on the right track. Keep refining your responses and expanding on these areas with more specific information. Great job, and I’m looking forward to seeing how your pitch develops!

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25/7/4 07:17

Your pitch sounds great! Keep up the excellent work with 'FocusFlow'!

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25/7/4 04:59

Great work on your 'Paint Team' pitch! Keep it up!

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25/7/3 15:32

You did an excellent job with your pitch, well done!
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