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Albany

New York

United States

NextPitch School Competitions

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竞赛简介

Invent a tool, game, or app that helps people understand the weather better. You could design a fun weather app, a new weather station, or a cool experiment!

关于我们

Testing

问题

Winter

解决方案

Spring

目标市场

Everyone

社会影响

Beautiful weather and happiness

下一步

Wait for March 21st

我们的学校和学区

Researching weather

支持者捐款的使用

Testing

感谢我们的支持者!
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25/7/3 15:32

You did an excellent job with your pitch, well done!

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25/7/3 13:24

Fantastic work on your pitch, "John James"! Keep up the great effort!

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25/7/3 01:35

Great work, keep it up!

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25/7/2 23:40

Great work, Evan! Keep it up!

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25/7/2 23:33

Great work on your pitch, Likith! Keep it up!

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25/7/2 23:25

Great work on your pitch, Aiden Ford!

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25/7/2 22:24

Certainly! Here's a rephrased version of the feedback: "Great job on your video! It's clear that you've put a lot of effort into your pitch. Keep up the good work and continue to refine your ideas. I'm excited to see how you develop your concepts further!"

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25/7/2 20:27

Great job

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25/7/2 20:04

Thank you for sharing your pitch, "John James." I appreciate your enthusiasm and passion for dogs, as well as your creative approach to promoting them. Your idea of using videos and social media to highlight the positive aspects of having dogs is a strong strategy, and it's clear you have a good understanding of your target audience. To enhance your pitch, consider focusing on how you can present a balanced view that celebrates dogs without comparing them negatively to other animals. This approach might help you reach an even wider audience who appreciate all pets. Additionally, think about how you could use storytelling to capture the unique qualities of dogs that have personally impacted your life. Keep up the great work, and continue sharing your love for dogs with the world!

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25/7/2 19:50

"Great work on your pitch, Aqil Khan!"

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25/7/2 17:19

Cats are amazing animals! Next time, try and edit the "um"'s and "uh"s out to make the video flow a little smoother. Great job!

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25/7/2 16:53

Good work
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