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ProX 暑期实习生

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堪萨斯城地铁

密苏里州

美国

ProX夏季

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竞赛简介

ProX 是一项真实世界学习计划,为高中生提供暑期专业体验。

关于我们

我叫 Logan,我为 Just us system 工作。我们的使命是解决从学校到监狱的问题。我们正努力为在校的青少年和孩子找到坚实的基础,让他们能够在未来取得成功,并远离麻烦。我们的解决方案是取消审前拘留,因为它没有任何好处,因为事实证明,那些被关押的人虽然出来了,但最终还是会再次入狱。事实证明,它还会将无辜且没有做错任何事的人关押长达一年。我们的受众是那些对所发生的行为负责的人和那些在学校处于不利地位的人。我们正在努力为他们找到改善自己并为他们的未来找到好出路的方法。

问题

学校至监狱管道问题

解决方案

取消审前拘留

目标市场

学校决策负责人

社会影响

可能降低累犯率和不公正拘留率

下一步

为学生寻找提高自我和规划未来的方法

我们的学校和学区

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我们目前不接受投票者的财务捐助。此推介是 ProX 竞赛的一部分。

感谢我们的支持者!
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25/7/15 06:12

Your pitch "Ruchi" is a great start in addressing the challenges of reducing sugar intake while maintaining flavor. To enhance your idea, consider exploring new alternatives and solutions further. Your effort aligns well with careers in nutrition, food technology, and product development. Pursuing studies in health sciences or culinary arts could deepen your understanding and open more opportunities. Keep refining your innovative approach to promote better health without compromising on taste.

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25/7/10 09:06

Good Job

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25/7/9 05:29

Great job, Aqil Khan! Your pitch was impressive and well-presented. Keep up the fantastic work!

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25/7/7 13:41

You're doing an amazing job! Keep up the excellent work with your 'liiti' pitch!

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25/7/7 12:50

Thank you for your "Ruchi" pitch. Your narrative can be more engaging by sharing specific experiences that led to your idea. Explore the impact of duplicacy on consumers and businesses to highlight the issue's significance. Detail strategies to identify authentic companies. Target specific chocolate lover groups for tailored strategies. Examples of integrating quality and social awareness will strengthen your pitch. Share innovative awareness campaign ideas and appealing rewards. Consider careers in brand management, market research analysis, or product development, and fields like business administration or marketing.

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25/7/7 08:38

Thank you for sharing your pitch titled "Weather Kiddos." It's great to see your enthusiasm for weather and your desire to help others understand it better. You've identified an important gap in weather knowledge and proposed a way to make information more accessible. Here are a few thoughts on your responses to help you refine your pitch: 1. Your personal passion for weather really shines through in your first response. Consider expanding on how your interest can engage and educate others. 2. You've highlighted a common issue: people often find weather complex or confusing. It might be helpful to explore specific examples of misunderstandings you aim to address. 3. When discussing "Weather information," think about what makes your approach unique. How will your information be presented in a way that's both informative and engaging? 4. The mention of "Weather people" is intriguing. Perhaps you could elaborate on how these individuals will contribute to your project and why they're essential. 5. Transforming your audience into "Informed people" is a wonderful goal. Consider outlining the specific benefits they will gain from understanding weather better. 6. Your idea about helping people "Get supplies" is practical and valuable. You might want to explain how you plan to guide them in acquiring the right resources. 7. Your positive attitude in response to "All is great" is refreshing. Keep that enthusiasm as you continue refining your ideas! 8. Finally, when it comes to "Lesson supplies," think about what materials or tools would be most effective in helping you achieve your educational goals. Overall, your pitch has a lot of potential, and with a bit more detail, it could become even more impactful. Keep up the great work!

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25/7/7 07:40

Great job on your pitch! You've laid a solid foundation with your responses. Highlighting the story behind "Rj Team" and focusing on duplicacy and uniqueness shows a clear understanding of your brand's identity. The emphasis on chocolate lovers and improving product quality is appealing to your target audience. Additionally, your focus on increasing awareness and knowledge about the right products is an excellent strategy for building trust with your customers. Lastly, your intention to incorporate better technologies demonstrates forward-thinking. Keep up the fantastic work!

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25/7/4 07:46

Thank you for submitting your pitch titled "Test gpt team." It's great to see you taking the initiative to develop your ideas. Here are a few thoughts on your responses: 1. **Test**: It's always a good idea to start with a clear description of your project. Try to provide more detail about your overall concept. 2. **Test Problem**: You've identified a problem, which is a crucial first step. Consider expanding on this to explain why it's significant and who it affects. 3. **Test Solution**: You've proposed a solution, which is fantastic. Think about how you can elaborate on this to demonstrate its effectiveness. 4. **Test Market**: Understanding your market is essential. Try to include more specifics about your target audience and any research you’ve done. 5. **Test Social Impact**: It’s wonderful to see you considering the social impact of your project. Think about how you can articulate this more clearly, perhaps by outlining the benefits. 6. **Test Next Step**: Planning your next steps shows foresight. It would be helpful to include more detailed action items or goals. 7. **Test Reflection**: Reflecting on your work is an important process. Consider sharing more about what you’ve learned or areas for improvement. 8. **Test**: Keep pushing forward with these ideas. Providing more detail and clarity will strengthen your pitch. Overall, you're on the right track. Keep refining your responses and expanding on these areas with more specific information. Great job, and I’m looking forward to seeing how your pitch develops!

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25/7/4 07:17

Your pitch sounds great! Keep up the excellent work with 'FocusFlow'!

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25/7/4 04:59

Great work on your 'Paint Team' pitch! Keep it up!

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25/7/3 15:32

You did an excellent job with your pitch, well done!

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25/7/3 13:24

Fantastic work on your pitch, "John James"! Keep up the great effort!
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