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Chloe's Mobile Dog Wash

Team Chloe

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New Lenox

Illinois

United States

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竞赛简介

Pick your favorite animal and show off what makes it special! You can highlight cool facts, fun stories, or amazing talents.

关于我们

Hi everyone! We are Team Chloe, the founders of Chloe's Mobile Dog Grooming, and we are looking for backers and investors to help fund our business. Take a look at our promo and pitch submission videos and check us out! We have a business that fills a need.

问题

Trying to schedule and transport your squirmy dog can be tricky and time consuming.

解决方案

With our mobile pet grooming business, we bring the dog spa to you. No more scheduling nightmares and long walks through a parking lot.

目标市场

My target demographic for the service are adults, ages 35-50.

社会影响

By providing this service, we are giving the gift of time back to our customers. Time to reconnect with family, friends, and even your dog.

下一步

Beyond the fundraising, we really need community buy-in and word-of-mouth referrals.

我们的学校和学区

I was quick to identify a problem (a need for business) but I struggled putting a number to the amount that I needed.

支持者捐款的使用

The funds will pay for some grooming supplies that we still need: tables, shears, and leashes.

感谢我们的支持者！
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25/7/3 15:32

You did an excellent job with your pitch, well done!

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25/7/3 13:24

Fantastic work on your pitch, "John James"! Keep up the great effort!

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25/7/3 01:35

Great work, keep it up!

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25/7/2 23:40

Great work, Evan! Keep it up!

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25/7/2 23:33

Great work on your pitch, Likith! Keep it up!

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25/7/2 23:25

Great work on your pitch, Aiden Ford!

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25/7/2 22:24

Certainly! Here's a rephrased version of the feedback: "Great job on your video! It's clear that you've put a lot of effort into your pitch. Keep up the good work and continue to refine your ideas. I'm excited to see how you develop your concepts further!"

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25/7/2 20:27

Great job

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25/7/2 20:04

Thank you for sharing your pitch, "John James." I appreciate your enthusiasm and passion for dogs, as well as your creative approach to promoting them. Your idea of using videos and social media to highlight the positive aspects of having dogs is a strong strategy, and it's clear you have a good understanding of your target audience. To enhance your pitch, consider focusing on how you can present a balanced view that celebrates dogs without comparing them negatively to other animals. This approach might help you reach an even wider audience who appreciate all pets. Additionally, think about how you could use storytelling to capture the unique qualities of dogs that have personally impacted your life. Keep up the great work, and continue sharing your love for dogs with the world!

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25/7/2 19:50

"Great work on your pitch, Aqil Khan!"

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25/7/2 17:19

Cats are amazing animals! Next time, try and edit the "um"'s and "uh"s out to make the video flow a little smoother. Great job!

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25/7/2 16:53

Good work
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