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Black screen is a art project

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25/7/3 15:32

You did an excellent job with your pitch, well done!

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25/7/3 13:24

Fantastic work on your pitch, "John James"! Keep up the great effort!

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25/7/3 01:35

Great work, keep it up!

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25/7/2 23:40

Great work, Evan! Keep it up!

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25/7/2 23:33

Great work on your pitch, Likith! Keep it up!

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25/7/2 23:25

Great work on your pitch, Aiden Ford!

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25/7/2 22:24

Certainly! Here's a rephrased version of the feedback: "Great job on your video! It's clear that you've put a lot of effort into your pitch. Keep up the good work and continue to refine your ideas. I'm excited to see how you develop your concepts further!"

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25/7/2 20:27

Great job

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25/7/2 20:04

Thank you for sharing your pitch, "John James." I appreciate your enthusiasm and passion for dogs, as well as your creative approach to promoting them. Your idea of using videos and social media to highlight the positive aspects of having dogs is a strong strategy, and it's clear you have a good understanding of your target audience. To enhance your pitch, consider focusing on how you can present a balanced view that celebrates dogs without comparing them negatively to other animals. This approach might help you reach an even wider audience who appreciate all pets. Additionally, think about how you could use storytelling to capture the unique qualities of dogs that have personally impacted your life. Keep up the great work, and continue sharing your love for dogs with the world!

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25/7/2 19:50

"Great work on your pitch, Aqil Khan!"

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25/7/2 17:19

Cats are amazing animals! Next time, try and edit the "um"'s and "uh"s out to make the video flow a little smoother. Great job!

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25/7/2 16:53

Good work
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标准一:

To evaluate a student project with the term "Orange included somewhere," check if the color orange is visibly present in the project, such as in visuals, graphics, or text. Ensure that its inclusion is relevant and enhances the overall presentation or theme of the project. The presence of orange should be intentional and contribute to the project's objectives or aesthetics.

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To evaluate whether "Black Included somewhere" in a student project, check if the project incorporates the term "Black" in a meaningful way, such as in the content, title, or themes. Ensure that the usage is relevant to the project's topic and contributes to the overall understanding or purpose. Additionally, verify that the inclusion is respectful and contextually appropriate.

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To evaluate if a student project "has a twist ending," check if the conclusion presents an unexpected or surprising turn that changes the audience's understanding of the story. The twist should be logically built up through subtle clues and should enhance the overall narrative without confusing the audience. Assess whether the twist adds depth and interest to the project while maintaining coherence in the storyline.

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To evaluate "uses reverse chronological order" in a student project, check if the events or information are presented starting with the most recent and moving backwards to earlier dates. Ensure that this order is consistently applied throughout the project, making it easy to follow and understand. Verify that the structure effectively highlights the progression from recent to past events.

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To evaluate the term "Shocks everybody" in a student project, look for elements that are surprising, unexpected, or provoke a strong emotional reaction from the audience. Assess how effectively the project challenges assumptions or presents new, thought-provoking ideas. Consider the impact on both the intended audience and the broader community.

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