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San Diego

Evan Behrens

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This is one amazing pitch! Contact the competition host for details.

Success Message

رسالة الفشل

Livestream
حول الملعب

Prairie Village

Kansas

United States

NextPitch School Competitions

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Competition Brief

Invent a tool, game, or app that helps people understand the weather better. You could design a fun weather app, a new weather station, or a cool experiment!

معلومات عنا

I am an Intern for MOXIE Solutions Development testing student accounts.

مشكلة

San Diego has some of the best weather in the United States.

حل

San Diego

السوق المستهدف

Other people making pitches

التأثير المجتمعي

None

الخطوات التالية

There are not necessarily next steps.

مدارسنا ومناطقنا

Resource  |  Support Needs

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Evan Behrens
تعليقات

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تعليق جديد

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3‏/7‏/25، 3:32 م

You did an excellent job with your pitch, well done!

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3‏/7‏/25، 1:24 م

Fantastic work on your pitch, "John James"! Keep up the great effort!

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3‏/7‏/25، 1:35 ص

Great work, keep it up!

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2‏/7‏/25، 11:40 م

Great work, Evan! Keep it up!

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2‏/7‏/25، 11:33 م

Great work on your pitch, Likith! Keep it up!

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2‏/7‏/25، 11:25 م

Great work on your pitch, Aiden Ford!

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2‏/7‏/25، 10:24 م

Certainly! Here's a rephrased version of the feedback: "Great job on your video! It's clear that you've put a lot of effort into your pitch. Keep up the good work and continue to refine your ideas. I'm excited to see how you develop your concepts further!"

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2‏/7‏/25، 8:27 م

Great job

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2‏/7‏/25، 8:04 م

Thank you for sharing your pitch, "John James." I appreciate your enthusiasm and passion for dogs, as well as your creative approach to promoting them. Your idea of using videos and social media to highlight the positive aspects of having dogs is a strong strategy, and it's clear you have a good understanding of your target audience. To enhance your pitch, consider focusing on how you can present a balanced view that celebrates dogs without comparing them negatively to other animals. This approach might help you reach an even wider audience who appreciate all pets. Additionally, think about how you could use storytelling to capture the unique qualities of dogs that have personally impacted your life. Keep up the great work, and continue sharing your love for dogs with the world!

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2‏/7‏/25، 7:50 م

"Great work on your pitch, Aqil Khan!"

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2‏/7‏/25، 5:19 م

Cats are amazing animals! Next time, try and edit the "um"'s and "uh"s out to make the video flow a little smoother. Great job!

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2‏/7‏/25، 4:53 م

Good work
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هل تريد التعليق أو الحكم على العروض؟ انضم إلينا اليوم!

وصول القاضي:
قم بإجراء تقييم

1- لم افعل

2- أدلة قليلة

3- تم استيفاء بعض المتطلبات

4- تم استيفاء معظم المتطلبات

5- تم استيفاء كافة المتطلبات

المعيار الأول:

A video is submitted.

1- لم افعل

2- أدلة قليلة

3- تم استيفاء بعض المتطلبات

4- تم استيفاء معظم المتطلبات

5- تم استيفاء جميع المتطلبات

المعيار الثاني:

Written responses have been included.

1- لم افعل

2- أدلة قليلة

3- تم استيفاء بعض المتطلبات

4- تم استيفاء معظم المتطلبات

5- تم استيفاء كافة المتطلبات

Criteria Three:

The submission is related to weather.

1- لم افعل

2- أدلة قليلة

3- تم استيفاء بعض المتطلبات

4- تم استيفاء معظم المتطلبات

5- تم استيفاء جميع المتطلبات

المعيار الرابع:

Free from grammar, spelling, and punctuation errors.

1- لم افعل

2- أدلة قليلة

3- تم استيفاء بعض المتطلبات

4- تم استيفاء معظم المتطلبات

5- تم استيفاء جميع المتطلبات

المعيار الخامس:

Submitted on time.

التقييم الإجمالي:

1

Thanks for contributing to the growth of young innovators!

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