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Success Message
رسالة الفشل
Livestream
حول الملعب
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Competition Brief
Write a creative eulogy (farewell speech) for a character who lived on the edges of society. Show their story and why they mattered.
معلومات عنا
مشكلة
حل
السوق المستهدف
التأثير المجتمعي
الخطوات التالية
مدارسنا ومناطقنا
Resource | Support Needs
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13/8/25، 1:53 م
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13/8/25، 9:40 ص
Your pitch for RAY shows great potential and creativity! To strengthen your solution, consider diving deeper into market research to better understand the specific needs and preferences of your target audience. Additionally, seek mentorship opportunities or network with industry professionals to gain valuable insights and experiences that could refine your approach. Keep up the fantastic work, and remember that every step you take brings you closer to making a meaningful impact!

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12/8/25، 1:18 ص
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11/8/25، 7:53 ص
Nice work
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11/8/25، 7:48 ص
Great Job

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8/8/25، 11:54 م
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7/8/25، 10:14 م
Your pitch for RAY is off to a fantastic start! Consider exploring how similar solutions have been successfully implemented in the market to strengthen your approach and gain valuable insights. Additionally, connecting with mentors in your field can provide guidance and open doors to new opportunities. Keep up the great work, and I'm excited to see where your innovative idea takes you!

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5/8/25، 12:49 ص
Your passion for cats is truly inspiring! As you continue with your project, consider reaching out to local animal shelters or veterinary clinics for partnerships and support, as they can provide valuable resources and expertise. Additionally, engaging with online cat communities could help broaden your reach and gain more support for your initiative. Keep up the fantastic work, and I have no doubt that your dedication will make a significant impact!

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5/8/25، 12:46 ص
Great job on your pitch! It's clear you have a passion for penguins, and that enthusiasm can be a powerful tool in engaging your audience. To strengthen your pitch, consider identifying a specific problem related to penguins that you can address or raise awareness about, which could add depth to your project. Additionally, exploring how your interest in penguins could lead to educational or environmental opportunities might enhance its social impact. Keep up the fantastic work and continue sharing your love for penguins with the world!

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5/8/25، 12:45 ص
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4/8/25، 11:09 م
You're off to a fantastic start with your pitch, and it's clear you're passionate about making a difference for lemurs. To strengthen your project, consider collaborating with wildlife organizations that can provide valuable insights and resources. Additionally, engaging with social media influencers who focus on conservation could help amplify your message and reach a larger audience. Keep up the great work, and I'm excited to see how your campaign will inspire change and awareness!

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4/8/25، 11:02 م
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وصول القاضي:
المعيار الأول:
The eulogy created for Johnny includes specific details that come from the book The Outsiders.
1- لم افعل
2- أدلة قليلة
3- تم استيفاء بعض المتطلبات
4- تم استيفاء معظم المتطلبات
5- تم استيفاء كافة المتطلبات
المعيار الثاني:
The student was able to understand the character's perspective it is written from and made the eulogy believable to that character.
1- لم افعل
2- أدلة قليلة
3- تم استيفاء بعض المتطلبات
4- تم استيفاء معظم المتطلبات
5- تم استيفاء جميع المتطلبات
Criteria Three:
The eulogy evokes some kind of emotional response from the reader.
1- لم افعل
2- أدلة قليلة
3- تم استيفاء بعض المتطلبات
4- تم استيفاء معظم المتطلبات
5- تم استيفاء كافة المتطلبات
المعيار الرابع:
The writer has a clear understanding of grammar and there are no grammatical errors.
1- لم افعل
2- أدلة قليلة
3- تم استيفاء بعض المتطلبات
4- تم استيفاء معظم المتطلبات
5- تم استيفاء جميع المتطلبات
المعيار الخامس:
The written piece flows easily and makes sense to the reader.
1- لم افعل
2- أدلة قليلة
3- تم استيفاء بعض المتطلبات
4- تم استيفاء معظم المتطلبات
5- تم استيفاء جميع المتطلبات
التقييم الإجمالي:
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