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رسالة الفشل
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Competition Brief
Write a creative eulogy (farewell speech) for a character who lived on the edges of society. Show their story and why they mattered.
معلومات عنا
مشكلة
حل
السوق المستهدف
التأثير المجتمعي
الخطوات التالية
مدارسنا ومناطقنا
Resource | Support Needs
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تعليقات
(* تعليقات)
تعليق جديد
شكرًا لك على إرسال تعليقك. تعليقك في انتظار موافقة المعلم
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24/4/25، 3:56 م
This was a fantastic pitch! You showed how informed you are about the market space you are entering by understanding and adding in the gamification that comes with your mascot.
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24/4/25، 3:48 م
Your video is grate and shows how much work you have put in to a Cotten candy business! I did get lost when reading the written submission as it covers skin care products and not cotton candy. This discrepancy made the pitch unclear but a simple update and clarification would get you back on track in no time.
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23/4/25، 6:42 م
Great job, Michael!
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23/4/25، 1:35 م
Great job, Israel!
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23/4/25، 9:21 ص
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23/4/25، 9:18 ص
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23/4/25، 12:19 ص
Great job, Joy!
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22/4/25، 2:11 م
Great job, Raya!
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22/4/25، 2:13 ص
Great Job!
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21/4/25، 8:52 م
Great products and it sounds like you already have a business going and could grow it even more!
I am a resource navigator with KC Sourcelink and part of my job is to help new businesses grow by creating an action plan that give free resources in the Kansas City market that helps businesses grow! If you need free, additional support- you can reach out to KC Sourcelink to book a free coaching session.
PS- I am a business owner as well :) (Platos Closet Belton)
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21/4/25، 8:27 م
Hello! Great idea! I feel your passion and connection to your business idea!
I am a resource partner for KC Sourcelink- https://www.kcsourcelink.com
We provide free resources of over 230 connections to help you build and grow a business.
I am also own a Plato's Closet in Belton, MO ( IG: #platosclosetbeltonmo) and I think it is a wonderful idea to help support identity through clothing. It helps build confidence and individuality.
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20/4/25، 1:26 م
Great job, Jesiah!
لم يتم العثور على أي تعليقات
هل تريد التعليق أو الحكم على العروض؟ انضم إلينا اليوم!
وصول القاضي:
1- لم افعل
2- أدلة قليلة
3- تم استيفاء بعض المتطلبات
4- تم استيفاء معظم المتطلبات
5- تم استيفاء كافة المتطلبات
المعيار الأول:
The eulogy created for Johnny includes specific details that come from the book The Outsiders.
1- لم افعل
2- أدلة قليلة
3- تم استيفاء بعض المتطلبات
4- تم استيفاء معظم المتطلبات
5- تم استيفاء جميع المتطلبات
المعيار الثاني:
The student was able to understand the character's perspective it is written from and made the eulogy believable to that character.
1- لم افعل
2- أدلة قليلة
3- تم استيفاء بعض المتطلبات
4- تم استيفاء معظم المتطلبات
5- تم استيفاء كافة المتطلبات
Criteria Three:
The eulogy evokes some kind of emotional response from the reader.
1- لم افعل
2- أدلة قليلة
3- تم استيفاء بعض المتطلبات
4- تم استيفاء معظم المتطلبات
5- تم استيفاء جميع المتطلبات
المعيار الرابع:
The writer has a clear understanding of grammar and there are no grammatical errors.
1- لم افعل
2- أدلة قليلة
3- تم استيفاء بعض المتطلبات
4- تم استيفاء معظم المتطلبات
5- تم استيفاء جميع المتطلبات
المعيار الخامس:
The written piece flows easily and makes sense to the reader.
التقييم الإجمالي:
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