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Moes Mows Lawn Care

Oskar Moes

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رسالة الفشل

إرسال عرض تقديمي
إرسال عرض تقديمي
Livestream
حول الملعب

City:

ولاية:

دولة:

المدرسة أو المنظمة:

Overland Park

Kansas

United States

SMSD Student Chamber

Competition Brief

Students practice pitching their business ideas and get helpful advice before the big competition.

معلومات عنا

My name is Oskar Moes and I own Moes Mows Lawn Care. I am a sophomore at Shawnee Mission South. I work mainly around Overland Park. You can find me on Instagram, facebook, or through my website.

مشكلة

The problem we solve here at Moes Mows Lawn Care is that some people don’t have the time, are physically unable, or just simply don’t want to do or worry about their lawn.

حل

The services we provide to fix the problem.
-Lawn Mowing
-Seasonal Cleanups
-Mulch Installation
-Hedge Trimming
-Various Landscaping

السوق المستهدف

My target market is homeowners who live in Overland Park, Prairie Village, Leawood. Especially the elderly or disabled who are unable to maintain their lawn, and busy homeowners who don't have the time but they still want their yard to look good.

التأثير المجتمعي

Some of the positive impacts
-Keeping well maintained lawns and enhancing the overall aesthetic of a neighborhood
-Supporting the local economy by keeping money circulating within our community
-Being an example of a young entrepreneur which inspires other teenagers
- Saving time and reducing stress for home owners

الخطوات التالية

Will be included with final submission.

مدارسنا ومناطقنا

Everything went well as I am very passionate about my business and love talking about it

Resource  |  Support Needs

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Special message...
Oskar Moes
تعليقات

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تعليق جديد

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شكرًا لك على إرسال تعليقك. تعليقك في انتظار موافقة المعلم

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6‏/6‏/25، 8:24 م

Works

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2‏/6‏/25، 1:03 م

nice and good revoltiniized writing

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28‏/5‏/25، 8:53 ص

hii

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26‏/5‏/25، 11:53 ص

accepted

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24‏/4‏/25، 3:56 م

This was a fantastic pitch! You showed how informed you are about the market space you are entering by understanding and adding in the gamification that comes with your mascot.

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24‏/4‏/25، 3:48 م

Your video is grate and shows how much work you have put in to a Cotten candy business! I did get lost when reading the written submission as it covers skin care products and not cotton candy. This discrepancy made the pitch unclear but a simple update and clarification would get you back on track in no time.

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23‏/4‏/25، 6:42 م

Great job, Michael!

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23‏/4‏/25، 1:35 م

Great job, Israel!

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23‏/4‏/25، 9:21 ص

Example comment

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23‏/4‏/25، 9:18 ص

Example comment...abcd.

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23‏/4‏/25، 12:19 ص

Great job, Joy!

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22‏/4‏/25، 2:11 م

Great job, Raya!
لم يتم العثور على أي تعليقات

هل تريد التعليق أو الحكم على العروض؟ انضم إلينا اليوم!

وصول القاضي:
قم بإجراء تقييم

المعيار الأول:

Includes a video.

1- لم افعل

2- أدلة قليلة

3- تم استيفاء بعض المتطلبات

4- تم استيفاء معظم المتطلبات

5- تم استيفاء كافة المتطلبات

المعيار الثاني:

Video has presenter shown.

1- لم افعل

2- أدلة قليلة

3- تم استيفاء بعض المتطلبات

4- تم استيفاء معظم المتطلبات

5- تم استيفاء جميع المتطلبات

Criteria Three:

Video includes slides.

1- لم افعل

2- أدلة قليلة

3- تم استيفاء بعض المتطلبات

4- تم استيفاء معظم المتطلبات

5- تم استيفاء كافة المتطلبات

المعيار الرابع:

Includes a written component.

1- لم افعل

2- أدلة قليلة

3- تم استيفاء بعض المتطلبات

4- تم استيفاء معظم المتطلبات

5- تم استيفاء جميع المتطلبات

المعيار الخامس:

Spelling and grammar check.

1- لم افعل

2- أدلة قليلة

3- تم استيفاء بعض المتطلبات

4- تم استيفاء معظم المتطلبات

5- تم استيفاء جميع المتطلبات

التقييم الإجمالي:

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Thanks for contributing to the growth of young innovators!

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