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Moes Mows Lawn Care

Oskar Moes

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رسالة الفشل

Livestream
حول الملعب

Overland Park

Kansas

United States

SMSD Student Chamber

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Competition Brief

Students practice pitching their business ideas and get helpful advice before the big competition.

معلومات عنا

My name is Oskar Moes and I own Moes Mows Lawn Care. I am a sophomore at Shawnee Mission South. I work mainly around Overland Park. You can find me on Instagram, facebook, or through my website.

مشكلة

The problem we solve here at Moes Mows Lawn Care is that some people don’t have the time, are physically unable, or just simply don’t want to do or worry about their lawn.

حل

The services we provide to fix the problem.
-Lawn Mowing
-Seasonal Cleanups
-Mulch Installation
-Hedge Trimming
-Various Landscaping

السوق المستهدف

My target market is homeowners who live in Overland Park, Prairie Village, Leawood. Especially the elderly or disabled who are unable to maintain their lawn, and busy homeowners who don't have the time but they still want their yard to look good.

التأثير المجتمعي

Some of the positive impacts
-Keeping well maintained lawns and enhancing the overall aesthetic of a neighborhood
-Supporting the local economy by keeping money circulating within our community
-Being an example of a young entrepreneur which inspires other teenagers
- Saving time and reducing stress for home owners

الخطوات التالية

Will be included with final submission.

مدارسنا ومناطقنا

Everything went well as I am very passionate about my business and love talking about it

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Oskar Moes
تعليقات

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تعليق جديد

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2‏/7‏/25، 12:30 ص

Great effort on your pitch, 'Cam'! Keep up the excellent work!

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2‏/7‏/25، 12:27 ص

Great work on your pitch, 'PJHaligheri'! Keep it up!

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1‏/7‏/25، 11:25 م

Fantastic work, Aqil Khan! Keep it up!

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1‏/7‏/25، 10:46 م

Great work on your pitch! Keep up the fantastic effort!

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1‏/7‏/25، 10:06 م

Thank you for submitting your pitch! I can see that you have thoughtfully engaged with the questions, and your affirmative responses show you are confident in your ideas. Keep up the great work, and feel free to expand on your thoughts if you want to provide more details. You're doing a fantastic job, and I'm here to support you as you continue to develop your pitch!

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1‏/7‏/25، 9:44 م

Great job, Aiden Ford! I really loved your pitch!

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1‏/7‏/25، 7:25 م

Wonderful video, Aqil Khan! As someone who loves dogs, I found your pitch incredibly persuasive and thought-provoking about why cats might just be the ultimate pet choice. Fantastic job!

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1‏/7‏/25، 7:13 م

Your perspective is incredibly insightful! Highlighting the calendar as the greatest invention ever demonstrates remarkable depth. You've identified how it plays a crucial role in organizing our daily lives, influencing agricultural cycles, and shaping cultures worldwide. Your appreciation for such a fundamental concept truly reflects your keen awareness of how timekeeping structures our world. Keep up the great work, Evan!

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30‏/6‏/25، 7:52 م

"You're doing an amazing job, Aqil Khan!"

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30‏/6‏/25، 10:48 ص

Great Work

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28‏/6‏/25، 12:58 ص

Well done! Keep up the great work!

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27‏/6‏/25، 10:57 م

Thank you for submitting your pitch titled "undefined." I appreciate your effort and creativity in developing your idea. Your work shows potential, and I encourage you to continue refining and expanding on it. Keep exploring different angles and details to fully articulate your vision. I'm confident that with a bit more development, your pitch can become even more compelling. Great start, and I look forward to seeing how it evolves!
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وصول القاضي:
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2- أدلة قليلة

3- تم استيفاء بعض المتطلبات

4- تم استيفاء معظم المتطلبات

5- تم استيفاء كافة المتطلبات

المعيار الأول:

Includes a video.

1- لم افعل

2- أدلة قليلة

3- تم استيفاء بعض المتطلبات

4- تم استيفاء معظم المتطلبات

5- تم استيفاء جميع المتطلبات

المعيار الثاني:

Video has presenter shown.

1- لم افعل

2- أدلة قليلة

3- تم استيفاء بعض المتطلبات

4- تم استيفاء معظم المتطلبات

5- تم استيفاء كافة المتطلبات

Criteria Three:

Video includes slides.

1- لم افعل

2- أدلة قليلة

3- تم استيفاء بعض المتطلبات

4- تم استيفاء معظم المتطلبات

5- تم استيفاء جميع المتطلبات

المعيار الرابع:

Includes a written component.

1- لم افعل

2- أدلة قليلة

3- تم استيفاء بعض المتطلبات

4- تم استيفاء معظم المتطلبات

5- تم استيفاء جميع المتطلبات

المعيار الخامس:

Spelling and grammar check.

التقييم الإجمالي:

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Thanks for contributing to the growth of young innovators!

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