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10A - Bomb Voyage

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Kansas City Metro

Missouri

United States

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Competition Brief

ProX is a Real World Learning initiative providing summer professional experiences for high school students.

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Our problem is women coming out of jail can’t get jobs because they have a bad background and nobody wants to hire them. Our solution is that we will use business like bomb voyage to give them a second chance so they will not go back to jail and end up back to where they was at. Our audience is focused on the woman that are getting out of jail and the next step is to get 5,000 so we can get the woman started and on the right path there for they won’t go back to jail and they can have a better life then what they started with.

Problem

Women recently released from jail struggle to find employment due to their backgrounds.

Solution

Use businesses like Bomb Voyage to provide employment opportunities and second chances to these women.

Audience | Target Market

Women recently released from jail.

Learning Outcomes  |  Community Impact

This solution could reduce recidivism rates, support women in rebuilding their lives, and promote more inclusive employment practices.

Next Steps

Acquire $5,000 to help these women get started on a new path.

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We are not currently accepting financial contributions from our voters. This pitch is part of the ProX competition.

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7/3/25, 1:35 AM

Great work, keep it up!

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7/2/25, 11:40 PM

Great work, Evan! Keep it up!

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7/2/25, 11:33 PM

Great work on your pitch, Likith! Keep it up!

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7/2/25, 11:25 PM

Great work on your pitch, Aiden Ford!

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7/2/25, 10:24 PM

Certainly! Here's a rephrased version of the feedback: "Great job on your video! It's clear that you've put a lot of effort into your pitch. Keep up the good work and continue to refine your ideas. I'm excited to see how you develop your concepts further!"

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7/2/25, 8:27 PM

Great job

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7/2/25, 8:04 PM

Thank you for sharing your pitch, "John James." I appreciate your enthusiasm and passion for dogs, as well as your creative approach to promoting them. Your idea of using videos and social media to highlight the positive aspects of having dogs is a strong strategy, and it's clear you have a good understanding of your target audience. To enhance your pitch, consider focusing on how you can present a balanced view that celebrates dogs without comparing them negatively to other animals. This approach might help you reach an even wider audience who appreciate all pets. Additionally, think about how you could use storytelling to capture the unique qualities of dogs that have personally impacted your life. Keep up the great work, and continue sharing your love for dogs with the world!

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7/2/25, 7:50 PM

"Great work on your pitch, Aqil Khan!"

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7/2/25, 5:19 PM

Cats are amazing animals! Next time, try and edit the "um"'s and "uh"s out to make the video flow a little smoother. Great job!

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7/2/25, 4:53 PM

Good work

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7/2/25, 4:19 PM

Great effort on your pitch, Cam! Keep up the excellent work!

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7/2/25, 2:54 PM

You’ve done an excellent job with your FocusFlow pitch! Your ability to clearly articulate the problem and present a well-thought-out solution is impressive. The integration of the Pomodoro Technique with white noise is a smart approach, as it draws on proven methods to address common productivity challenges. Your detailed plan for moving the project forward, including market research, the development of an MVP, and strategic marketing efforts, shows a strong understanding of what it takes to bring an innovative product to market. I also appreciate your awareness of potential challenges, such as market differentiation and scalability, and your consideration of strategies to overcome them. Keep up the great work, and continue refining your strategy as you gather more feedback—your proactive approach is a key strength!
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