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Newsies Pitch

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Ray-Pec Enterprise & Design

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Competition Brief

Enterprise and Design is a program where students get regular high school credits but are earning it through client connected projects. We match them with industry professionals (clients) and they work with teams to complete real world projects with actual problems that those clients need to have solved and they come up with solutions and pitch those ideas.

About

We are the Newsies. Landon Tanner, Connor, Andre and Je’Shan make up our team. We as a team are working with our client, Dennis Minich.

Problem

The problem we are working on is bringing a younger audience to our client's website. We sent out a survey to identify exactly why younger people don’t read the news anymore.

Solution

The solution we came up with was adding a discussion board to his site. We knew that people love to share their ideas, and to be heard. So adding a place for people to do that seemed like the perfect plan for our team.

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Next Steps

The next step for the newsies is implementing the template we chose, into his site. We could then customize the discussion board, to fit exactly what our client needs.

 Reflection  |  Other Info

Our ideas for our pitch were great, and Dennis loved them. The only problems we had were during recording. Things like echo and bad audio were our only problems.

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7/3/25, 1:24 PM

Fantastic work on your pitch, "John James"! Keep up the great effort!

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7/3/25, 1:35 AM

Great work, keep it up!

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7/2/25, 11:40 PM

Great work, Evan! Keep it up!

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7/2/25, 11:33 PM

Great work on your pitch, Likith! Keep it up!

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7/2/25, 11:25 PM

Great work on your pitch, Aiden Ford!

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7/2/25, 10:24 PM

Certainly! Here's a rephrased version of the feedback: "Great job on your video! It's clear that you've put a lot of effort into your pitch. Keep up the good work and continue to refine your ideas. I'm excited to see how you develop your concepts further!"

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7/2/25, 8:27 PM

Great job

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7/2/25, 8:04 PM

Thank you for sharing your pitch, "John James." I appreciate your enthusiasm and passion for dogs, as well as your creative approach to promoting them. Your idea of using videos and social media to highlight the positive aspects of having dogs is a strong strategy, and it's clear you have a good understanding of your target audience. To enhance your pitch, consider focusing on how you can present a balanced view that celebrates dogs without comparing them negatively to other animals. This approach might help you reach an even wider audience who appreciate all pets. Additionally, think about how you could use storytelling to capture the unique qualities of dogs that have personally impacted your life. Keep up the great work, and continue sharing your love for dogs with the world!

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7/2/25, 7:50 PM

"Great work on your pitch, Aqil Khan!"

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7/2/25, 5:19 PM

Cats are amazing animals! Next time, try and edit the "um"'s and "uh"s out to make the video flow a little smoother. Great job!

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7/2/25, 4:53 PM

Good work

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7/2/25, 4:19 PM

Great effort on your pitch, Cam! Keep up the excellent work!
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