Big Sis' Closet
LaNaya
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Overland Park
Kansas
United States
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Competition Brief
Welcome to the SMSD Student Chamber's Business Showcase! This is an inspiring business competition designed to highlight PK-12 students who run REAL businesses in the Shawnee Mission School District. The top five business owners with the most votes and highest judge ratings will present their business ideas to a panel of esteemed judges and a vibrant audience on April 30.
Awards at the live April 30 Business Showcase are:
1st Place: $1,100
2nd Place: $600
3rd Place: $300
To learn more or join the Student Chamber, visit www.SMSDChamber.org today!
About
My name is LaNaya, and I am currently a high school student with a passion for fashion! I want to create outfits and clothes for people to help them feel comfortable and confident. I know from my personal experiences that I have struggled to find clothing that not only fits me but makes me feel confident, I end up having to alter them myself, or they fall into the abyss (aka my closet). I want to help others prevent that problem and create custom clothing for them! As well as help people find their style without the hassle of buying and trying a bunch of random clothes!
Problem
Many people struggle to find their style and find affordable clothing that fits their style.
Solution
That’s why we created Bis Sis’ Closet, a way to get your big sis’ advice. You can get style help and custom clothing!
Audience | Target Market
Gen Z
Learning Outcomes | Community Impact
Next Steps
My next steps are to get more inventory and start making sales.
Reflection | Other Info
When creating my pitch, it was a little difficult brainstorming ideas, but once I got started and asked for a little help, I flew through it.
Resource | Support Needs
Investments:
Increase inventory
Advertisement
Shipping Costs
College Classes
Materials

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7/7/25, 1:41 PM
You're doing an amazing job! Keep up the excellent work with your 'liiti' pitch!

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7/7/25, 12:50 PM
Certainly! Here's the rephrased feedback:
Hi [Student's Name],
Thank you for sharing your pitch titled "Ruchi." I appreciate the effort and thought you put into developing your responses. Here’s some feedback to help you refine and enhance your pitch:
1. **My Story**: Your narrative is the foundation of your pitch. Consider expanding your story to include specific experiences or motivations that led you to this idea. This will help create a more personal and engaging connection with your audience.
2. **Duplicacy**: It’s great that you’re addressing the issue of duplicacy. Delve deeper into why this is a significant problem and how it impacts both consumers and businesses. This will help strengthen the urgency and importance of your pitch.
3. **Identifying the Original and Fake Companies**: This is an important aspect of your pitch. Consider explaining the methods or strategies you plan to use to differentiate between authentic and counterfeit companies. This will demonstrate the feasibility of your approach.
4. **Chocolate Lovers**: Targeting chocolate lovers is a fantastic idea! Think about identifying specific groups within this audience (e.g., health-conscious consumers, gourmet chocolate enthusiasts) to tailor your strategies more effectively.
5. **Better Quality Chocolates and Social Awareness**: Highlighting quality and social awareness is commendable. You might want to provide examples of how these elements can be integrated into your product or service to make a meaningful impact.
6. **Create Awareness Campaigns**: Awareness campaigns are a powerful tool. Consider outlining some innovative campaign ideas and how they can effectively reach and engage your target audience.
7. **N/A**: If there’s any additional information you can provide here, it might help to strengthen your overall pitch.
8. **Rewards**: Offering rewards can be a great incentive. Think about what types of rewards would be most appealing to your audience and how they align with your goals.
Overall, you’ve laid a solid foundation for your pitch. Keep exploring and refining these ideas, and you’ll continue to make great progress. I’m excited to see how your project develops!
Best wishes,
[Your Name]

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7/7/25, 8:38 AM
Thank you for sharing your pitch titled "Weather Kiddos." It's great to see your enthusiasm for weather and your desire to help others understand it better. You've identified an important gap in weather knowledge and proposed a way to make information more accessible. Here are a few thoughts on your responses to help you refine your pitch:
1. Your personal passion for weather really shines through in your first response. Consider expanding on how your interest can engage and educate others.
2. You've highlighted a common issue: people often find weather complex or confusing. It might be helpful to explore specific examples of misunderstandings you aim to address.
3. When discussing "Weather information," think about what makes your approach unique. How will your information be presented in a way that's both informative and engaging?
4. The mention of "Weather people" is intriguing. Perhaps you could elaborate on how these individuals will contribute to your project and why they're essential.
5. Transforming your audience into "Informed people" is a wonderful goal. Consider outlining the specific benefits they will gain from understanding weather better.
6. Your idea about helping people "Get supplies" is practical and valuable. You might want to explain how you plan to guide them in acquiring the right resources.
7. Your positive attitude in response to "All is great" is refreshing. Keep that enthusiasm as you continue refining your ideas!
8. Finally, when it comes to "Lesson supplies," think about what materials or tools would be most effective in helping you achieve your educational goals.
Overall, your pitch has a lot of potential, and with a bit more detail, it could become even more impactful. Keep up the great work!

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7/7/25, 7:40 AM
Great job on your pitch! You've laid a solid foundation with your responses. Highlighting the story behind "Rj Team" and focusing on duplicacy and uniqueness shows a clear understanding of your brand's identity. The emphasis on chocolate lovers and improving product quality is appealing to your target audience. Additionally, your focus on increasing awareness and knowledge about the right products is an excellent strategy for building trust with your customers. Lastly, your intention to incorporate better technologies demonstrates forward-thinking. Keep up the fantastic work!

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7/4/25, 7:46 AM
Thank you for submitting your pitch titled "Test gpt team." It's great to see you taking the initiative to develop your ideas. Here are a few thoughts on your responses:
1. **Test**: It's always a good idea to start with a clear description of your project. Try to provide more detail about your overall concept.
2. **Test Problem**: You've identified a problem, which is a crucial first step. Consider expanding on this to explain why it's significant and who it affects.
3. **Test Solution**: You've proposed a solution, which is fantastic. Think about how you can elaborate on this to demonstrate its effectiveness.
4. **Test Market**: Understanding your market is essential. Try to include more specifics about your target audience and any research you’ve done.
5. **Test Social Impact**: It’s wonderful to see you considering the social impact of your project. Think about how you can articulate this more clearly, perhaps by outlining the benefits.
6. **Test Next Step**: Planning your next steps shows foresight. It would be helpful to include more detailed action items or goals.
7. **Test Reflection**: Reflecting on your work is an important process. Consider sharing more about what you’ve learned or areas for improvement.
8. **Test**: Keep pushing forward with these ideas. Providing more detail and clarity will strengthen your pitch.
Overall, you're on the right track. Keep refining your responses and expanding on these areas with more specific information. Great job, and I’m looking forward to seeing how your pitch develops!

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7/4/25, 7:17 AM
Your pitch sounds great! Keep up the excellent work with 'FocusFlow'!

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7/4/25, 4:59 AM
Great work on your 'Paint Team' pitch! Keep it up!

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7/3/25, 3:32 PM
You did an excellent job with your pitch, well done!

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7/3/25, 1:24 PM
Fantastic work on your pitch, "John James"! Keep up the great effort!

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7/3/25, 1:35 AM
Great work, keep it up!

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7/2/25, 11:40 PM
Great work, Evan! Keep it up!

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7/2/25, 11:33 PM
Great work on your pitch, Likith! Keep it up!
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Criteria One:
Idea Clarity & Problem Solving Is the product or service clearly explained? Does it solve a real problem in a meaningful or unique way?
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Customer & Market Fit Are the target customers well defined? Is there an understanding of how to reach them and why they’ll buy?
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Differentiation & Innovation What makes this idea stand out from competitors or the status quo? Is there a clear unique value proposition?
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Team Readiness & Use of Funds Does the team seem prepared to take action? Are proposed uses of funding thoughtful, realistic, and specific?
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Viability & Future Plans Is there a path to launch or scale? Have they made progress (milestones/traction)? Do they have a clear next step?
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