4A - Amir'acle Body Butters-Iyshia Sims
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The problem is that the body butters melt in temperatures over 75 degrees and when they resolidify they look they don't look or feel the same. They also look half empty. Our solution includes getting the products into more stores or creating a new product that can withstand temperatures over 75 degrees or create a new product for the hotter months. Our main audience of for mothers and soon to be mothers so that they can feel good with what they are putting on their body. Our next steps would be to make a new product that doesn't melt during the hotter months. (Total words 102)
Problem
Body butters melt in temperatures over 75 degrees and change in appearance and feel when resolidified
Solution
Get the products into more stores or create a new product that can withstand higher temperatures
Audience | Target Market
Mothers and soon-to-be mothers
Learning Outcomes | Community Impact
Enhanced satisfaction and confidence in the product among consumers
Next Steps
Create a new product that doesn't melt in high temperatures
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8/13/25, 1:53 PM
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8/13/25, 9:40 AM
Your pitch for RAY shows great potential and creativity! To strengthen your solution, consider diving deeper into market research to better understand the specific needs and preferences of your target audience. Additionally, seek mentorship opportunities or network with industry professionals to gain valuable insights and experiences that could refine your approach. Keep up the fantastic work, and remember that every step you take brings you closer to making a meaningful impact!

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8/12/25, 1:18 AM
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8/11/25, 7:53 AM
Nice work
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8/11/25, 7:48 AM
Great Job

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8/7/25, 10:14 PM
Your pitch for RAY is off to a fantastic start! Consider exploring how similar solutions have been successfully implemented in the market to strengthen your approach and gain valuable insights. Additionally, connecting with mentors in your field can provide guidance and open doors to new opportunities. Keep up the great work, and I'm excited to see where your innovative idea takes you!

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8/5/25, 12:49 AM
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8/5/25, 12:46 AM
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8/4/25, 11:09 PM
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8/4/25, 11:02 PM
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