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The Shawshank Redemption
Team Shawshank Redemption
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Atlanta
Georgia
United States
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Competition Brief
Pitch your idea for the next big movie! Create a story that’s exciting, emotional, funny, or adventurous, and explain why people would love to watch it.
About
The film tells the story of Andy Dufresne (Tim Robbins), a banker wrongly convicted of murdering his wife and her lover. He is sentenced to two life sentences at Shawshank State Penitentiary.
Over nearly two decades, Andy navigates the brutal realities of prison life, forming a deep friendship with fellow inmate Ellis "Red" Redding (Morgan Freeman).
The film explores themes of hope, perseverance, friendship, and the resilience of the human spirit in the face of adversity.
Problem
Injustice and False Imprisonment:
Andy Dufresne is wrongly convicted of murder, forcing him to endure decades of imprisonment for a crime he didn't commit. This sets up the fundamental conflict: how does an innocent man survive within a system designed to break him?
The Dehumanizing Nature of Imprisonment:
The film explores the corrosive effects of long-term incarceration. Shawshank represents a system that strips individuals of their dignity, hope, and sense of self. The problem becomes: how does one maintain their humanity in such a dehumanizing environment?
Solution
Combating Injustice and False Imprisonment:
Andy's solution isn't about legal exoneration within the film's timeline. Instead, it's about maintaining his inner sense of justice and refusing to let the system define him.
He meticulously plans and executes his escape, reclaiming his freedom and exposing the warden's corruption. This serves as a form of personal justice.
Resisting Dehumanization:
Andy's solution lies in preserving his intellectual and emotional life. He maintains his dignity by:
Cultivating his mind through education.
Finding small acts of beauty and hope (like the music on the prison PA system).
Building meaningful connections with others, particularly Red.
His long term project of digging the tunnel is a massive act of mental fortitude.
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Learning Outcomes | Community Impact
Next Steps
Emphasize the project's artistic or social value. Explain why it matters and what impact it will have on audiences.
Show how backer contributions will directly contribute to achieving the project's goals.
If applicable, highlight any charitable or community-focused aspects of the project.
Reflection | Other Info
Frame backer contributions as an investment in a story that embodies hope and the resilience of the human spirit.
Emphasize how backer support will enable the project to overcome obstacles and achieve its full potential.
Resource | Support Needs
Clearly outline where the funds will go. Break down the budget into specific categories (e.g., production, post-production, distribution, marketing).
Provide regular updates to backers on the project's progress and how their contributions are being used.
Offer tangible rewards or acknowledgments to backers based on their contribution level.
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4/24/25, 3:56 PM
This was a fantastic pitch! You showed how informed you are about the market space you are entering by understanding and adding in the gamification that comes with your mascot.
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4/24/25, 3:48 PM
Your video is grate and shows how much work you have put in to a Cotten candy business! I did get lost when reading the written submission as it covers skin care products and not cotton candy. This discrepancy made the pitch unclear but a simple update and clarification would get you back on track in no time.
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4/23/25, 6:42 PM
Great job, Michael!
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4/23/25, 1:35 PM
Great job, Israel!
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4/23/25, 12:19 AM
Great job, Joy!
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4/22/25, 2:11 PM
Great job, Raya!
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4/22/25, 2:13 AM
Great Job!
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4/21/25, 8:52 PM
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PS- I am a business owner as well :) (Platos Closet Belton)
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4/21/25, 8:27 PM
Hello! Great idea! I feel your passion and connection to your business idea!
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We provide free resources of over 230 connections to help you build and grow a business.
I am also own a Plato's Closet in Belton, MO ( IG: #platosclosetbeltonmo) and I think it is a wonderful idea to help support identity through clothing. It helps build confidence and individuality.
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4/20/25, 1:26 PM
Great job, Jesiah!
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