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Moes Mows Lawn Care
Oskar Moes
Location
Overland Park
Kansas
United States
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Competition Brief
Welcome to our Practice Feedback session! We are preparing for Round One of the SMSD Student Chamber Startup Showcase. Your feedback will help our students make updates to their presentations.
About
My name is Oskar Moes and I own Moes Mows Lawn Care. I am a sophomore at Shawnee Mission South. I work mainly around Overland Park. You can find me on Instagram, facebook, or through my website.
Problem
The problem we solve here at Moes Mows Lawn Care is that some people don’t have the time, are physically unable, or just simply don’t want to do or worry about their lawn.
Solution
The services we provide to fix the problem.
-Lawn Mowing
-Seasonal Cleanups
-Mulch Installation
-Hedge Trimming
-Various Landscaping
Audience | Target Market
My target market is homeowners who live in Overland Park, Prairie Village, Leawood. Especially the elderly or disabled who are unable to maintain their lawn, and busy homeowners who don't have the time but they still want their yard to look good.
Learning Outcomes | Community Impact
Some of the positive impacts
-Keeping well maintained lawns and enhancing the overall aesthetic of a neighborhood
-Supporting the local economy by keeping money circulating within our community
-Being an example of a young entrepreneur which inspires other teenagers
- Saving time and reducing stress for home owners
Next Steps
Will be included with final submission.
Reflection | Other Info
Everything went well as I am very passionate about my business and love talking about it
Resource | Support Needs
Equipment
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4/24/25, 3:56 PM
This was a fantastic pitch! You showed how informed you are about the market space you are entering by understanding and adding in the gamification that comes with your mascot.
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4/24/25, 3:48 PM
Your video is grate and shows how much work you have put in to a Cotten candy business! I did get lost when reading the written submission as it covers skin care products and not cotton candy. This discrepancy made the pitch unclear but a simple update and clarification would get you back on track in no time.
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4/23/25, 6:42 PM
Great job, Michael!
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4/23/25, 1:35 PM
Great job, Israel!
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4/23/25, 12:19 AM
Great job, Joy!
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4/22/25, 2:11 PM
Great job, Raya!
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4/22/25, 2:13 AM
Great Job!
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4/21/25, 8:52 PM
Great products and it sounds like you already have a business going and could grow it even more!
I am a resource navigator with KC Sourcelink and part of my job is to help new businesses grow by creating an action plan that give free resources in the Kansas City market that helps businesses grow! If you need free, additional support- you can reach out to KC Sourcelink to book a free coaching session.
PS- I am a business owner as well :) (Platos Closet Belton)
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4/21/25, 8:27 PM
Hello! Great idea! I feel your passion and connection to your business idea!
I am a resource partner for KC Sourcelink- https://www.kcsourcelink.com
We provide free resources of over 230 connections to help you build and grow a business.
I am also own a Plato's Closet in Belton, MO ( IG: #platosclosetbeltonmo) and I think it is a wonderful idea to help support identity through clothing. It helps build confidence and individuality.
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4/20/25, 1:26 PM
Great job, Jesiah!
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