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ProX Summer Interns

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Kansas City Metro

Missouri

United States

ProX Summer

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Competition Brief

ProX is a Real World Learning initiative providing summer professional experiences for high school students.

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My name is Logan and I work with Just us system. Our mission is to solve school to prison pipeline. We are trying to find ways for teenagers and kids in school to have a solid foundation so they can be successful in their future and for them to stay out of trouble. Our solutions was to take pre trial detention away because it does not give any benefits because it has been proven that those who go in will get out but will end up in jail again. It has been proven to also hold people in there for as long as a year who are innocent and who’ve done nothing wrong. Our audience is for the people in charge of the actions that happen and who are in the bad position in school. We are trying to figure out ways for them to better themselves and find a good way for their future.

Problem

School to prison pipeline issue

Solution

Eliminate pre-trial detention

Audience | Target Market

Individuals in charge of decision-making at schools

Learning Outcomes  |  Community Impact

Potential reduction in rates of recidivism and unjust detainment

Next Steps

Find ways for students to improve themselves and plan for their future

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We are not currently accepting financial contributions from our voters. This pitch is part of the ProX competition.

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7/3/25, 3:32 PM

You did an excellent job with your pitch, well done!

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7/3/25, 1:24 PM

Fantastic work on your pitch, "John James"! Keep up the great effort!

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7/3/25, 1:35 AM

Great work, keep it up!

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7/2/25, 11:40 PM

Great work, Evan! Keep it up!

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7/2/25, 11:33 PM

Great work on your pitch, Likith! Keep it up!

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7/2/25, 11:25 PM

Great work on your pitch, Aiden Ford!

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7/2/25, 10:24 PM

Certainly! Here's a rephrased version of the feedback: "Great job on your video! It's clear that you've put a lot of effort into your pitch. Keep up the good work and continue to refine your ideas. I'm excited to see how you develop your concepts further!"

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7/2/25, 8:27 PM

Great job

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7/2/25, 8:04 PM

Thank you for sharing your pitch, "John James." I appreciate your enthusiasm and passion for dogs, as well as your creative approach to promoting them. Your idea of using videos and social media to highlight the positive aspects of having dogs is a strong strategy, and it's clear you have a good understanding of your target audience. To enhance your pitch, consider focusing on how you can present a balanced view that celebrates dogs without comparing them negatively to other animals. This approach might help you reach an even wider audience who appreciate all pets. Additionally, think about how you could use storytelling to capture the unique qualities of dogs that have personally impacted your life. Keep up the great work, and continue sharing your love for dogs with the world!

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7/2/25, 7:50 PM

"Great work on your pitch, Aqil Khan!"

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7/2/25, 5:19 PM

Cats are amazing animals! Next time, try and edit the "um"'s and "uh"s out to make the video flow a little smoother. Great job!

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7/2/25, 4:53 PM

Good work
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